https://shifti.org/api.php?action=feedcontributions&feedformat=atom&user=64.128.200.78 2026-04-21T09:18:20Z User contributions MediaWiki 1.46.0-alpha https://shifti.org/index.php?title=Talk:The_Unknown_Arrival&diff=9410 2008-12-05T16:42:09Z

<p>64.128.200.78: New page: A good start. One comment. In Chapter 4 the sentence: &quot;After a quick scanning of the Index of books, she quickly located a small stack of recently-written history journals and headed to a...</p> <hr /> <div>A good start.<br /> <br /> One comment. In Chapter 4 the sentence: &quot;After a quick scanning of the Index of books, she quickly located a small stack of recently-written history journals and headed to a sequestered corner of the library to crack them open.&quot; Is repeated, apparently by accident.</div>

64.128.200.78 https://shifti.org/index.php?title=User_talk:JonBuck/Life_Could_be_a_Dream&diff=3921 2007-11-29T18:30:25Z

<p>64.128.200.78: New page: It&#039;s a shame that this story will not be completed. I really had become interested in the characters, especially in the interaction between Helen and Tasha. The outlined continuations look...</p> <hr /> <div>It's a shame that this story will not be completed. I really had become interested in the characters, especially in the interaction between Helen and Tasha. The outlined continuations look good and I would like to see if this sets up a confrontation (or even better, but harder to write -- tension) between Helen/Travis and his/her mother. If Helen and Tasha both start to learn of and use magic how will the mother respond? It is fascinating to think about, but these aren't my characters, so it's hard to know.<br /> <br /> Randy</div>

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