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JonBuck: Byline.

2008-01-06T06:48:28Z

Byline.

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	~~By [[User:~~JonBuck\|~~Jon Buck]]~~		{{byline\|author=JonBuck
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	"You are hereby sentenced to death by quantum cannon for high treason against the Lord of the Directorate. May the One On High grant you forgiveness." The pronouncement wasn't exactly unexpected, but it was read by a creature best described as an evil teddy bear. What the aliens ''really'' looked like nobody was quite sure, but this was the public form they chose to show Earthlings. Three feet tall, furry, with a bear-like face. This one had blotchy brown-black fur.		"You are hereby sentenced to death by quantum cannon for high treason against the Lord of the Directorate. May the One On High grant you forgiveness." The pronouncement wasn't exactly unexpected, but it was read by a creature best described as an evil teddy bear. What the aliens ''really'' looked like nobody was quite sure, but this was the public form they chose to show Earthlings. Three feet tall, furry, with a bear-like face. This one had blotchy brown-black fur.

JonBuck: formatting eerror

2008-01-06T02:09:18Z

formatting eerror

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	For a moment I was totally overwhelmed by the sensory assault, (Sound and smell and fur and hooves...) which may have saved my life. Pure instinct took over as I remembered I had to flee. Tail flagging, I sprang forwards, propelled by fear and wonder at the same time.		For a moment I was totally overwhelmed by the sensory assault, (Sound and smell and fur and hooves...) which may have saved my life. Pure instinct took over as I remembered I had to flee. Tail flagging, I sprang forwards, propelled by fear and wonder at the same time.

	Branches ineffectually pulled on my fur as I flew between them down the deer trail, initially heading back towards the tribe's camp. ''I'm fucking '''''flying!''''' I exclaimed, exulting in the sheer joy of swiftness. Animal terror was quickly replaced by equally powerful joy. Then I remembered, east! ''Head east!''		Branches ineffectually pulled on my fur as I flew between them down the deer trail, initially heading back towards the tribe's camp. ''I'm fucking '''flying!''''' I exclaimed, exulting in the sheer joy of swiftness. Animal terror was quickly replaced by equally powerful joy. Then I remembered, east! ''Head east!''

	By then I was at the bottom of the hill. I burst out of the trail, nostrils flaring, the reek of a dozen unwashed human bodies adding to the new symphony of sound and smell. The humans, as startled as I was, stood up and grabbed their spears. I bounded sideways, turning a hard left, away from the descending sun. They were had to be quicker than that if they wanted to catch me!		By then I was at the bottom of the hill. I burst out of the trail, nostrils flaring, the reek of a dozen unwashed human bodies adding to the new symphony of sound and smell. The humans, as startled as I was, stood up and grabbed their spears. I bounded sideways, turning a hard left, away from the descending sun. They were had to be quicker than that if they wanted to catch me!

JonBuck at 02:07, 6 January 2008

2008-01-06T02:07:44Z

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	For a moment I was totally overwhelmed by the sensory assault, (Sound and smell and fur and hooves...) which may have saved my life. Pure instinct took over as I remembered I had to flee. Tail flagging, I sprang forwards, propelled by fear and wonder at the same time.		For a moment I was totally overwhelmed by the sensory assault, (Sound and smell and fur and hooves...) which may have saved my life. Pure instinct took over as I remembered I had to flee. Tail flagging, I sprang forwards, propelled by fear and wonder at the same time.

	Branches ineffectually pulled on my fur as I flew between them down the deer trail, initially heading back towards the tribe's camp. ''I'm fucking '''''flying!''''''' I exclaimed, exulting in the sheer joy of swiftness. Animal terror was quickly replaced by equally powerful joy. Then I remembered, east! ''Head east!''		Branches ineffectually pulled on my fur as I flew between them down the deer trail, initially heading back towards the tribe's camp. ''I'm fucking '''''flying!''''' I exclaimed, exulting in the sheer joy of swiftness. Animal terror was quickly replaced by equally powerful joy. Then I remembered, east! ''Head east!''

	By then I was at the bottom of the hill. I burst out of the trail, nostrils flaring, the reek of a dozen unwashed human bodies adding to the new symphony of sound and smell. The humans, as startled as I was, stood up and grabbed their spears. I bounded sideways, turning a hard left, away from the descending sun. They were had to be quicker than that if they wanted to catch me!		By then I was at the bottom of the hill. I burst out of the trail, nostrils flaring, the reek of a dozen unwashed human bodies adding to the new symphony of sound and smell. The humans, as startled as I was, stood up and grabbed their spears. I bounded sideways, turning a hard left, away from the descending sun. They were had to be quicker than that if they wanted to catch me!

JonBuck at 05:05, 27 August 2007

2007-08-27T05:05:32Z

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	Aside from that introductory conversation, we spoke very little over the next couple days. It was all cervine body language. It was unusual for a buck and doe to travel together at this time of year. Periodically we'd have to give ourselves a nudge to stay together. But during that time we were little different from the other deer that populated this landscape. There were still signs of human habitation everywhere--from the odd abandoned cabins to entire towns burned to the ground. They all smelled... creepy as hell (dead places). The arrival of "magic" had softened us up a lot.		Aside from that introductory conversation, we spoke very little over the next couple days. It was all cervine body language. It was unusual for a buck and doe to travel together at this time of year. Periodically we'd have to give ourselves a nudge to stay together. But during that time we were little different from the other deer that populated this landscape. There were still signs of human habitation everywhere--from the odd abandoned cabins to entire towns burned to the ground. They all smelled... creepy as hell (dead places). The arrival of "magic" had softened us up a lot.

	''You okay?'' ~~Jason~~ asked after we'd skirted one ghost town.		''You okay?'' Paul asked after we'd skirted one ghost town.

	''No. But it's nothing we have to deal with now,'' I replied with a sigh. ''How much farther?''		''No. But it's nothing we have to deal with now,'' I replied with a sigh. ''How much farther?''

JonBuck: Formatting fixes.

2007-08-25T22:37:21Z

Formatting fixes.

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	By ~~JonBuck~~ [[~~Category~~:~~Story]][[Category:Transgender]][[Category:Animal~~]]		By [[User:JonBuck\|Jon Buck]]

	"You are hereby sentenced to death by quantum cannon for high treason against the Lord of the Directorate. May the One On High grant you forgiveness." The pronouncement wasn't exactly unexpected, but it was read by a creature best described as an evil teddy bear. What the aliens ''really'' looked like nobody was quite sure, but this was the public form they chose to show Earthlings. Three feet tall, furry, with a bear-like face. This one had blotchy brown-black fur.		"You are hereby sentenced to death by quantum cannon for high treason against the Lord of the Directorate. May the One On High grant you forgiveness." The pronouncement wasn't exactly unexpected, but it was read by a creature best described as an evil teddy bear. What the aliens ''really'' looked like nobody was quite sure, but this was the public form they chose to show Earthlings. Three feet tall, furry, with a bear-like face. This one had blotchy brown-black fur.
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	In I went.		In I went.

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JonBuck: Adding series box

2007-08-12T07:25:29Z

Adding series box

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	By JonBuck [[Category:Story]][[Category:Transgender]][[Category:Animal]]		By JonBuck [[Category:Story]][[Category:Transgender]][[Category:Animal]]

JonBuck at 04:13, 7 August 2007

2007-08-07T04:13:25Z

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	By JonBuck [[Category:Story]]		By JonBuck [[Category:Story]][[Category:Transgender]][[Category:Animal]]

	"You are hereby sentenced to death by quantum cannon for high treason against the Lord of the Directorate. May the One On High grant you forgiveness." The pronouncement wasn't exactly unexpected, but it was read by a creature best described as an evil teddy bear. What the aliens ''really'' looked like nobody was quite sure, but this was the public form they chose to show Earthlings. Three feet tall, furry, with a bear-like face. This one had blotchy brown-black fur.		"You are hereby sentenced to death by quantum cannon for high treason against the Lord of the Directorate. May the One On High grant you forgiveness." The pronouncement wasn't exactly unexpected, but it was read by a creature best described as an evil teddy bear. What the aliens ''really'' looked like nobody was quite sure, but this was the public form they chose to show Earthlings. Three feet tall, furry, with a bear-like face. This one had blotchy brown-black fur.

Bryan: Category:Jon Buck

2007-08-05T05:09:28Z

Category:Jon Buck

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ShadowWolf: add to "Story" category.

2007-07-21T23:09:40Z

add to "Story" category.

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	By JonBuck		By JonBuck [[Category:Story]]

	"You are hereby sentenced to death by quantum cannon for high treason against the Lord of the Directorate. May the One On High grant you forgiveness." The pronouncement wasn't exactly unexpected, but it was read by a creature best described as an evil teddy bear. What the aliens ''really'' looked like nobody was quite sure, but this was the public form they chose to show Earthlings. Three feet tall, furry, with a bear-like face. This one had blotchy brown-black fur.		"You are hereby sentenced to death by quantum cannon for high treason against the Lord of the Directorate. May the One On High grant you forgiveness." The pronouncement wasn't exactly unexpected, but it was read by a creature best described as an evil teddy bear. What the aliens ''really'' looked like nobody was quite sure, but this was the public form they chose to show Earthlings. Three feet tall, furry, with a bear-like face. This one had blotchy brown-black fur.

Bryan: formatting and category

2007-07-21T06:28:11Z

formatting and category

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