Old Time Religion 2: Lord of the Forest - Revision history

Triskelelynx: minor editing an rephrasing

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minor editing an rephrasing

Triskelelynx at 07:55, 7 January 2012

2012-01-07T07:55:34Z

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	I'd appreciate any constructive advice anyone might want to offer.''		I'd appreciate any constructive advice anyone might want to offer.''

			--[[User:Triskelelynx\|Triskelelynx]] 07:55, 7 January 2012 (UTC)

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	Immediately, a surge of heat seared into my feet from the sandy soil. I tried to pick them up but could not. The heat traveled up my legs, and cramps in my calves and feet forced me onto my toes. Bones in my feet grated against each other. I looked down, and three of the toes on each feet were receding upwards. The other two were changing, darkening, hardening. It took me a few minutes to realize they were becoming hooves. Cloven deer hooves. I watched in horrified fascination as my feet grew longer, and the heat reshaped my ankles into hocks. Brown hair sprouted on my legs as they cramped and cracked. My shins shortened, and my thighs became powerful haunches. The heat traveled up my body until I felt like I was completely engulfed in flame.		Immediately, a surge of heat seared into my feet from the sandy soil. I tried to pick them up but could not. The heat traveled up my legs, and cramps in my calves and feet forced me onto my toes. Bones in my feet grated against each other. I looked down, and three of the toes on each feet were receding upwards. The other two were changing, darkening, hardening. It took me a few minutes to realize they were becoming hooves. Cloven deer hooves. I watched in horrified fascination as my feet grew longer, and the heat reshaped my ankles into hocks. Brown hair sprouted on my legs as they cramped and cracked. My shins shortened, and my thighs became powerful haunches. The heat traveled up my body until I felt like I was completely engulfed in flame.

	~~''(Is more detail needed here, or is it okay to leave some to the reader's imagination? -Triskie)''~~

	At last, the burning stopped. From the waist down, I was a male elk. Above that, I was a man, a fit, muscular man, except for the impressive rack of antlers on my head.		At last, the burning stopped. From the waist down, I was a male elk. Above that, I was a man, a fit, muscular man, except for the impressive rack of antlers on my head.

	An owl flew overhead, and I could feel its thoughts, focused on a mouse in the bushes on the ~~of the~~ side of the clearing. I realized that I could feel all the life around me - all the birds and animals, down to the invertebrates scurrying across the ground and burrowing beneath it. I could even feel the web of life sustained by the microbes in soil, plants and air. I stood and ~~marveled at~~ the intricacy of the pulsating, constantly changing interplay of life energies that surrounded us.		An owl flew overhead, and I could feel its thoughts, focused on a mouse in the bushes on the other side of the clearing. I realized that I could feel all the life around me - all the birds and animals, down to the invertebrates scurrying across the ground and burrowing beneath it. I could even feel the web of life sustained by the microbes in soil, plants and air. I stood still, marveling and dumbfounded by the intricacy of the pulsating, constantly changing interplay of life energies that surrounded us.

	I threw back my head, and bugled the challenge of the stag elk whose antlers and hooves I wore. The coyotes on the hillside stopped their hunt and added their song to mine, as did the white tail deer in the valley thickets below us. A stallion on the ranch over the hill knelt to me. Even the military dogs on the Army camp on the horizon yelped and howled, confusing and alarming their handlers.		I threw back my head, and bugled the challenge of the stag elk whose antlers and hooves I wore. The coyotes on the hillside stopped their hunt and added their song to mine, as did the white tail deer in the valley thickets below us. A stallion on the ranch over the hill knelt to me. Even the military dogs on the Army camp on the horizon yelped and howled, confusing and alarming their handlers.

Triskelelynx: More copy edit. I think it's something close to done. Comments, please?

2011-12-03T18:34:19Z

More copy edit. I think it's something close to done. Comments, please?

Triskelelynx: Copy edit

2011-12-03T18:05:36Z

Copy edit

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	Author's note: This is a sequel to a story that got lost in the crash. I'll have to recreate it at some point.		Author's note: This is a sequel to a story that got lost in the crash. I'll have to recreate it at some point.

	In the missing story, a pair of college students are going to see a movie. Instead, they meet Aphrodite, who offers one of them a gift. He asks for better understanding of women, and was changed into one for a semester.		In the missing story, a pair of college students are going to see a movie. Instead, they meet Aphrodite, who offers one of them a gift. He asks for better understanding of women, and was changed into one for a semester. Then she turns to the other, and says she'd give him a boon as well, but someone else has plans for him. This is his story.

	I'd appreciate any constructive advice anyone might want to offer.		I'd appreciate any constructive advice anyone might want to offer.
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	My girlfriend Jess and I were standing on a hillside on the edges of the Texas ~~hill country~~. It was May first - Beltaine - a warm spring night, and we were skyclad, or naked. In front of us was a large flat-topped boulder with an embroidered altar cloth on it. On the wine-colored cloth was a chalice, a knife and several candles. Jess was calling her Goddess as we started the ceremony.		My girlfriend Jess and I were standing on a hillside on the edges of the Texas Hill Country. It was May first - Beltaine - a warm spring night, and we were skyclad, or naked. In front of us was a large flat-topped boulder with an embroidered altar cloth on it. On the wine-colored cloth was a chalice, a knife and several candles. Jess was calling her Goddess as we started the ceremony.

	Until a few months ago, I had been ~~tolerant,~~ somewhat amused by Jess's choice of belief. Then I met the goddess Aphrodite and had watched her change my roommate into a girl. ~~That~~ had ~~caused~~ me ~~to reevaluate my attitude towards Wicca~~.		Until a few months ago, I had been somewhat amused by Jess's choice of belief. Then I met the goddess Aphrodite and had watched her change my roommate into a girl. Since then, I have become a believer in magic. My roommate, Tom, now Tommie, had used some of the insights he, er, she had gained to hook me up with a friend of ours. And that's how I ended up standing naked on a hillside, taking part in a neo-pagan ritual.

	~~So,~~ I listened as she finished her invocation and lit the Goddess candle. It was my turn to call the male half of the divinity. I began, rather nervously, to say the words I had rehearsed seveal times in my mind. Aphrodite had said that some other deity had plans for me. I ~~mumbled something about the Lord of the Forest~~, ~~Stag-king, Cernunnos~~, ~~protector~~ and ~~father, asking him to join us and lend his power~~ to ~~our rite. I struck a match and lit the God's candle~~.		I listened as she finished her invocation and lit the Goddess candle. It was my turn to call the male half of the divinity. I began, rather nervously, to say the words I had rehearsed seveal times in my mind. Aphrodite had said that some other deity had plans for me. With that in mind, I was sure that invoking a deity was asking for trouble. Still, I loved Jess, and she wanted me to be here.

	~~Immediately,~~ I ~~felt a surge~~ of ~~heat sear into my feet from~~ the ~~sandy soil. I tried to pick them up but I could not move. The heat traveled up my legs~~, and ~~cramps forced me onto my toes. Bones in my feet grated against each other. I looked down~~, and ~~three of on each feet were receding upwards. The other two were changing, darkening, hardening. It took me a few minutes~~ to ~~realize they were becoming hooves. Cloven deer hooves~~. I ~~watched in horrified fascination as my feet grew longer,~~ and ~~my ankles became hocks. Brown hair sprouted on my legs as they cramped and cracked~~.		I mumbled something about the Lord of the Forest, Stag-king, Cernunnos, protector and father, asking him to join us and lend his power to our rite. I struck a match and lit the God's candle.

	~~''(Is more detail needed here~~, ~~or is it okay~~ to ~~leave some~~ to ~~the reader's imagination?)''~~		Immediately, a surge of heat seared into my feet from the sandy soil. I tried to pick them up but I could not move. The heat traveled up my legs, and cramps forced me onto my toes. Bones in my feet grated against each other. I looked down, and three of the toes on each feet were receding upwards. The other two were changing, darkening, hardening. It took me a few minutes to realize they were becoming hooves. Cloven deer hooves. I watched in horrified fascination as my feet grew longer, and my ankles became hocks. Brown hair sprouted on my legs as they cramped and cracked. The heat traveled up my body until it felt like I was completely engulfed in flame.

			''(Is more detail needed here, or is it okay to leave some to the reader's imagination? -Triskie)''

	~~At last, the burning stopped and the changes finished. From the waist down, I was a male elk. Above that, I was a man, a fit, muscular man, except for the impressive rack of antlers on my head.~~

	~~An owl flew overhead~~, ~~and I could feel its thoughts, focused on a mouse in~~ the ~~bushes on the of the side of the clearing~~. ~~My consciousness expanded, and I could feel all~~ the ~~life around me - the birds and animals~~, ~~down to the invertebrates scurrying across the ground and burrowing beneath it.~~ I ~~could even feel the web of life sustained by the microbes in soil, plants and air~~. ~~I threw back my head~~, ~~and uttered the bugling challenge of the stag elk whose antlers and hooves~~ I ~~wore. The coyotes on the hillside stopped their hunt and added their song to mine~~, ~~as did the white tail deer in the valley thickets knelt to me. Even the police dogs on the Army camp on the horizon yelped and howled~~, ~~confusing their handlers. All the creatures with enough intelligence enough to do so signaled their obeisance to me~~, the ~~Lord~~ of ~~the Forest~~.		At last, the burning stopped. From the waist down, I was a male elk. Above that, I was a man, a fit, muscular man, except for the impressive rack of antlers on my head.

	~~All save one. Jess stood facing me~~, ~~with a small knowing smile~~, ~~lips slightly parted, and~~ a ~~look~~ in ~~her eyes~~ that ~~said she knew just what to do with an uppity male. She stepped forward~~ and ~~ran one hand up over my muscled chest~~, ~~barely touching~~ the ~~skin~~. ~~With her other hand, she reached up, grasped my antlers~~, and ~~pulled my face down to meet hers~~. ~~Our lips touched, open mouthed,~~ and ~~her tongue lightly ran over mine. She held my mouth to hers with a hand on~~ the ~~back~~ of ~~my neck~~, ~~as her other ran down and massaged the elk bull's sheath between my legs~~.		An owl flew overhead, and I could feel its thoughts, focused on a mouse in the bushes on the of the side of the clearing. I realized that I could feel all the life around me - all the birds and animals, down to the invertebrates scurrying across the ground and burrowing beneath it. I could even feel the web of life sustained by the microbes in soil, plants and air. I stood and marveled at the intricacy of the pulsating, constantly changing web of life energy that surrounded us.

	~~We made love~~ on ~~our altar. Her fair skin glowed gold~~ and white in the ~~moonlight and candlelight~~. ~~Her head was haloed by~~ the ~~pentacle embroidered~~ on the ~~altar cloth~~. I ~~tried to be gentle, conscious~~ of the ~~size of my elk parts~~. ~~She took me~~ with ~~a force that surprised~~ me~~. A small part of my brain rebelled. After all, my head should be somewhere around her rib cage. Then I realized that quibbling about that made no sense, given the rest of what had happened~~.		I threw back my head, and uttered the bugling challenge of the stag elk whose antlers and hooves I wore. The coyotes on the hillside stopped their hunt and added their song to mine, and the white tail deer in the valley thickets below us knelt to me. Even the military dogs on the Army camp on the horizon yelped and howled, confusing and alarming their handlers. I was the Lord of the Forest, and I was magnificent. From horizon to horizon, every creature with enough intelligence enough to do so signaled its obeisance to me.

	~~Her orgasm brought~~ me over the ~~top~~. ~~I lay~~ down ~~next~~ to ~~her~~, ~~gathered~~ her to me, and ~~pulled~~ the ~~altar cloth over us~~.		All creatures save one. Jess stood facing me, with a small knowing smile, lips slightly parted, and a look in her eyes that said she knew just what to do with an uppity male. She stepped forward and ran one hand up over my muscled chest, barely touching the skin. With her other hand, she reached up, grasped my antlers, and pulled my face down to meet hers. Our lips touched, open mouthed, and her tongue lightly ran over mine. She held my mouth to hers with a hand on the back of my neck, as her other ran down and massaged the elk bull's sheath between my legs.

	I ~~woke up~~ the ~~next morning at sunrise~~. ~~The memory of what happened last night came to~~ me in a ~~rush -~~ the ~~wonder I felt as I sensed~~ the ~~magnitude and glory~~ of the ~~life surrounding us, and~~ the ~~sacred sex that followed~~. I ~~grabbed my legs~~, ~~unsure whether I hoped~~ to ~~feel skin or elk hair~~.		We made love on our altar. Her fair skin glowed gold and white in the moonlight and candlelight. Her head was haloed by the pentacle embroidered on the altar cloth. She was every bit the Goddess to my God. I tried to be gentle, conscious of the size of my elk parts. She took me with a force that surprised me. A small part of my brain rebelled. After all, the head of my cock should be somewhere around her rib cage. Then the rest of my brain realized that quibbling about it made no sense, given the rest of what had happened. We moaned loudly together as her orgasm brought me over the top. I lay down next to her, gathered her to me, and pulled the altar cloth over us as a blanket.

	I felt skin. It came with a deep sense of loss, mingled with relief. Then I realized my leg felt odd. Hard. Firm. I lifted up the altar cloth we were using ~~as a blanket~~. Instead of the scrawny body I had arrived with, I was toned and muscular.		I woke up the next morning at sunrise. The memory of last night;s events came to me in a rush - the wonder of the magnitude and glory of the life surrounding us, and the sacred sex that followed. I grabbed my legs, unsure whether I hoped to feel human skin or elk hair.

			I felt skin. It came with a deep sense of loss, mingled with relief. Then I realized my leg felt odd. Hard. Firm. I lifted up the altar cloth we were using. Instead of the scrawny body I had arrived with, I was toned and muscular.

	A bluebird flew over us. I realized I had known it was going to before I saw or heard it. I didn't have the square mile awareness that I did last night, but I still had some of it. I wondered how I was going to tell my dad I wasn't going to major in business like we had planned. Instead, I was going to major in ecology with a minor in ancient religions.		A bluebird flew over us. I realized I had known it was going to before I saw or heard it. I didn't have the square mile awareness that I did last night, but I still had some of it. I wondered how I was going to tell my dad I wasn't going to major in business like we had planned. Instead, I was going to major in ecology with a minor in ancient religions.

	The same sense that told me about the bluebird told me that Jess was starting to wake up. I woke her up with a kiss. We made love again as a soft, warm rain fell. After we finished, she reached up above my head, and handed me a perfect elk antler.		The same sense that told me about the bluebird told me that Jess was starting to wake up. She too had been blessed. Her body was toned and strong, yet quintessentially feminine. I woke her up with a kiss. We made love again as a soft, warm rain fell. After we finished, she reached up above my head, and handed me a perfect elk antler.

	--[[User:Triskelelynx\|Triskelelynx]] 04:54, 3 December 2011 (UTC)		--[[User:Triskelelynx\|Triskelelynx]] 04:54, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Triskelelynx: corrected category

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corrected category

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Triskelelynx: Tried to move the story from the realm of porn to the realm of erotica, and categorized.

2011-12-03T17:23:58Z

Tried to move the story from the realm of porn to the realm of erotica, and categorized.

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	All save one. Jess stood facing me, with a small knowing smile, lips slightly parted, and a look in her eyes that said she knew just what to do with an uppity male. She stepped forward and ran one hand up over my muscled chest, barely touching the skin. With her other hand, she reached up, grasped my antlers, and pulled my face down to meet hers. Our lips touched, open mouthed, and her tongue lightly ran over mine. She held my mouth to hers with a hand on the back of my neck, as her other ran down and massaged the elk bull's sheath between my legs.		All save one. Jess stood facing me, with a small knowing smile, lips slightly parted, and a look in her eyes that said she knew just what to do with an uppity male. She stepped forward and ran one hand up over my muscled chest, barely touching the skin. With her other hand, she reached up, grasped my antlers, and pulled my face down to meet hers. Our lips touched, open mouthed, and her tongue lightly ran over mine. She held my mouth to hers with a hand on the back of my neck, as her other ran down and massaged the elk bull's sheath between my legs.

	~~Her ministrations soon had my erection spilling out, wrist thick and as long as my forearm, or as long as it was before my transformation. I picked Jess up, and lay her down~~ on our altar. Her fair skin glowed gold and white in the moonlight and candlelight. Her head was haloed by the pentacle on the altar cloth.		We made love on our altar. Her fair skin glowed gold and white in the moonlight and candlelight. Her head was haloed by the pentacle embroidered on the altar cloth. I tried to be gentle, conscious of the size of my elk parts. She took me with a force that surprised me. A small part of my brain rebelled. After all, my head should be somewhere around her rib cage. Then I realized that quibbling about that made no sense, given the rest of what had happened.

	She grabbed my cock and held the head against her pussy. I gently pushed into her, not wanting to hurt her. She tightened her legs around my hips and squeezed. I swank into her until my sheath bumped into her labia.		Her orgasm brought me over the top. I lay down next to her, gathered her to me, and pulled the altar cloth over us.

	~~A small part of my brain rebelled. After all, my head should be somewhere around her rib cage. Then I realized that quibbling about that made no sense, given the rest of what had happened.~~

	~~I pumped into her, at first slowly, then with increasing force. She moaned and bucked her hips until she came, loudly.~~ Her ~~muscles clenched against me, and~~ brought me over the top. I lay down next to her, gathered her to me, and pulled the altar cloth over us.

	I woke up the next morning at sunrise. The memory of what happened last night came to me in a rush - the wonder I felt as I sensed the magnitude and glory of the life surrounding us, and the sacred sex that followed. I grabbed my legs, unsure whether I hoped to feel skin or elk hair.		I woke up the next morning at sunrise. The memory of what happened last night came to me in a rush - the wonder I felt as I sensed the magnitude and glory of the life surrounding us, and the sacred sex that followed. I grabbed my legs, unsure whether I hoped to feel skin or elk hair.
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	The same sense that told me about the bluebird told me that Jess was starting to wake up. I woke her up with a kiss. We made love again as a soft, warm rain fell. After we finished, she reached up above my head, and handed me a perfect elk antler.		The same sense that told me about the bluebird told me that Jess was starting to wake up. I woke her up with a kiss. We made love again as a soft, warm rain fell. After we finished, she reached up above my head, and handed me a perfect elk antler.



	--[[User:Triskelelynx\|Triskelelynx]] 04:54, 3 December 2011 (UTC)		--[[User:Triskelelynx\|Triskelelynx]] 04:54, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
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Triskelelynx: Added author's note.

2011-12-03T16:55:06Z

Added author's note.

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			Author's note: This is a sequel to a story that got lost in the crash. I'll have to recreate it at some point.

			In the missing story, a pair of college students are going to see a movie. Instead, they meet Aphrodite, who offers one of them a gift. He asks for better understanding of women, and was changed into one for a semester.

			I'd appreciate any constructive advice anyone might want to offer.


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	''Let us worship like the druids,''		''Let us worship like the druids,''

Triskelelynx at 16:39, 3 December 2011

2011-12-03T16:39:21Z

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	I pumped into her, at first slowly, then with increasing force. She moaned and bucked her hips until she came, loudly. Her muscles clenched against me, and brought me over the top. I lay down next to her, gathered her to me, and pulled the altar cloth over us.		I pumped into her, at first slowly, then with increasing force. She moaned and bucked her hips until she came, loudly. Her muscles clenched against me, and brought me over the top. I lay down next to her, gathered her to me, and pulled the altar cloth over us.

	~~''(add a scene about waking~~ up the next morning)''		I woke up the next morning at sunrise. The memory of what happened last night came to me in a rush - the wonder I felt as I sensed the magnitude and glory of the life surrounding us, and the sacred sex that followed. I grabbed my legs, unsure whether I hoped to feel skin or elk hair.

			I felt skin. It came with a deep sense of loss, mingled with relief. Then I realized my leg felt odd. Hard. Firm. I lifted up the altar cloth we were using as a blanket. Instead of the scrawny body I had arrived with, I was toned and muscular.

			A bluebird flew over us. I realized I had known it was going to before I saw or heard it. I didn't have the square mile awareness that I did last night, but I still had some of it. I wondered how I was going to tell my dad I wasn't going to major in business like we had planned. Instead, I was going to major in ecology with a minor in ancient religions.

			The same sense that told me about the bluebird told me that Jess was starting to wake up. I woke her up with a kiss. We made love again as a soft, warm rain fell. After we finished, she reached up above my head, and handed me a perfect elk antler.



	--[[User:Triskelelynx\|Triskelelynx]] 04:54, 3 December 2011 (UTC)		--[[User:Triskelelynx\|Triskelelynx]] 04:54, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Triskelelynx at 04:54, 3 December 2011

2011-12-03T04:54:05Z

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	Immediately, I felt a surge of heat sear into my feet from the sandy soil. I tried to pick them up but I could not move. The heat traveled up my legs, and cramps forced me onto my toes. Bones in my feet grated against each other. I looked down, and three of on each feet were receding upwards. The other two were changing, darkening, hardening. It took me a few minutes to realize they were becoming hooves. Cloven deer hooves. I watched in horrified fascination as my feet grew longer, and my ankles became hocks. Brown hair sprouted on my legs as they cramped and cracked.		Immediately, I felt a surge of heat sear into my feet from the sandy soil. I tried to pick them up but I could not move. The heat traveled up my legs, and cramps forced me onto my toes. Bones in my feet grated against each other. I looked down, and three of on each feet were receding upwards. The other two were changing, darkening, hardening. It took me a few minutes to realize they were becoming hooves. Cloven deer hooves. I watched in horrified fascination as my feet grew longer, and my ankles became hocks. Brown hair sprouted on my legs as they cramped and cracked.

	~~...~~		''(Is more detail needed here, or is it okay to leave some to the reader's imagination?)''

	At last, the changes finished. From the waist down, I was a male elk. Above that, I was a man, a fit, muscular man, except for the impressive rack of antlers on my head.
			At last, the burning stopped and the changes finished. From the waist down, I was a male elk. Above that, I was a man, a fit, muscular man, except for the impressive rack of antlers on my head.

	An owl flew overhead, and I could feel its thoughts, focused on a mouse in the bushes on the of the side of the clearing. My consciousness expanded, and I could feel all the life around me - the birds and animals, down to the invertebrates scurrying across the ground and burrowing beneath it. I could even feel the web of life sustained by the microbes in soil, plants and air. I threw back my head, and uttered the bugling challenge of the stag elk whose antlers and hooves I wore. The coyotes on the hillside stopped their hunt and added their song to mine, as did the white tail deer in the valley thickets knelt to me. Even the police dogs on the Army camp on the horizon yelped and howled, confusing their handlers. All the creatures with enough intelligence enough to do so signaled their obeisance to me, the Lord of the Forest.		An owl flew overhead, and I could feel its thoughts, focused on a mouse in the bushes on the of the side of the clearing. My consciousness expanded, and I could feel all the life around me - the birds and animals, down to the invertebrates scurrying across the ground and burrowing beneath it. I could even feel the web of life sustained by the microbes in soil, plants and air. I threw back my head, and uttered the bugling challenge of the stag elk whose antlers and hooves I wore. The coyotes on the hillside stopped their hunt and added their song to mine, as did the white tail deer in the valley thickets knelt to me. Even the police dogs on the Army camp on the horizon yelped and howled, confusing their handlers. All the creatures with enough intelligence enough to do so signaled their obeisance to me, the Lord of the Forest.
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	A small part of my brain rebelled. After all, my head should be somewhere around her rib cage. Then I realized that quibbling about that made no sense, given the rest of what had happened.		A small part of my brain rebelled. After all, my head should be somewhere around her rib cage. Then I realized that quibbling about that made no sense, given the rest of what had happened.

	I pumped into her, at first slowly, then with increasing force. She moaned and bucked her hips until she came, loudly. Her muscles clenched against me, and brought me over the top.		I pumped into her, at first slowly, then with increasing force. She moaned and bucked her hips until she came, loudly. Her muscles clenched against me, and brought me over the top. I lay down next to her, gathered her to me, and pulled the altar cloth over us.

			''(add a scene about waking up the next morning)''


			--[[User:Triskelelynx\|Triskelelynx]] 04:54, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Triskelelynx at 04:36, 3 December 2011

2011-12-03T04:36:54Z

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	She grabbed my cock and held the head against her pussy. I gently pushed into her, not wanting to hurt her. She tightened her legs around my hips and squeezed. I swank into her until my sheath bumped into her labia.		She grabbed my cock and held the head against her pussy. I gently pushed into her, not wanting to hurt her. She tightened her legs around my hips and squeezed. I swank into her until my sheath bumped into her labia.

	A small part of my brain rebelled. After all, my head should be somewhere around her rib cage. Then I realized that quibbling about that made no sense, given the rest of what had happened.		A small part of my brain rebelled. After all, my head should be somewhere around her rib cage. Then I realized that quibbling about that made no sense, given the rest of what had happened.

			I pumped into her, at first slowly, then with increasing force. She moaned and bucked her hips until she came, loudly. Her muscles clenched against me, and brought me over the top.

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	My girlfriend Jess and I were standing on a hillside on the edges of the Texas Hill Country. It was May first - Beltaine - a warm spring night~~, and we were~~ skyclad, or naked~~. In~~ front of ~~us was~~ a large flat-topped boulder with an embroidered ~~altar cloth on it~~. On the wine-colored cloth was a chalice, a knife and several candles. Jess was calling her Goddess as we started the ceremony.		My girlfriend Jess and I were standing on a hillside on the edges of the Texas Hill Country. It was May first - Beltaine - a warm spring night. We stood skyclad, or naked, in front an altar consisting of a large flat-topped boulder with an cloth embroidered with mystic symbols. On the wine-colored cloth was a chalice, a knife and several candles. Jess was calling her Goddess as we started the ceremony.

	~~Until a few months ago,~~ I had been somewhat amused by Jess's choice of belief~~. Then~~ I met the goddess Aphrodite and had watched her change my roommate into a girl. Since then, I have become a believer in magic. My roommate, Tom, now Tommie, ~~had used some of the insights he, er, she had gained to hook~~ me ~~up with Jess~~. And that's how I ended up standing naked on a hillside, taking part in a neo-pagan ritual.		I had been somewhat amused by Jess's choice of belief until I met the goddess Aphrodite and had watched her change my roommate into a girl. Since then, I have become a believer in magic. I was clueless that Jess was interested in me until my roommate, Tom, now Tommie, told me. And that's how I ended up standing naked on a hillside, taking part in a neo-pagan ritual.

	I listened as she finished her invocation and lit the Goddess candle. It was my turn to call the male half of the divinity. I began, rather nervously, to say the words I had rehearsed ~~seveal~~ times in my mind. Aphrodite had said that some other deity had plans for me. I was sure that invoking a deity was asking for trouble. Still, I loved Jess, and she wanted me to be here.		I listened as she finished her invocation and lit the Goddess candle. It was my turn to call the male half of the divinity. I began, rather nervously, to say the words I had rehearsed several times in my mind. Aphrodite had said that some other deity had plans for me. I was sure that invoking a deity was asking for trouble. Still, I loved Jess, and she wanted me to be here.

	I mumbled something about the Lord of the Forest, Stag-king, Cernunnos, protector and father, asking him to join us and lend his power to our rite. I struck a match and lit the God's candle.		I mumbled something about the Lord of the Forest, Stag-king, Cernunnos, protector and father, asking him to join us and lend his power to our rite. I struck a match and lit the God's candle.

	Immediately, a surge of heat seared into my feet from the sandy soil. I tried to pick them up but could not. The heat traveled up my legs, and cramps in my calves and feet forced me onto my toes. Bones in my feet grated against each other. I looked down, and three of the toes on each feet were receding upwards. The other two were changing, darkening, hardening. It took me a few minutes to realize they were becoming hooves. Cloven deer hooves. I watched in horrified fascination as my feet grew longer, and the heat reshaped my ankles into hocks. Brown hair sprouted on my legs as ~~they~~ cramped and cracked. My shins shortened, and my thighs became powerful haunches. The heat traveled up my body until I felt like I was completely engulfed in flame.		Immediately, a surge of heat seared into my feet from the sandy soil. I tried to pick them up but could not. The heat traveled up my legs, and cramps in my calves and feet forced me onto my toes. Bones in my feet grated against each other. I looked down, and three of the toes on each feet were receding upwards. The other two were changing, darkening, hardening. It took me a few minutes to realize they were becoming hooves. Cloven deer hooves. I watched in horrified fascination as my feet grew longer, and the heat reshaped my ankles into hocks. Brown hair sprouted on my legs as my muscles and bones cramped and cracked. My shins shortened, and my thighs became powerful haunches. The heat traveled up my body until I felt like I was completely engulfed in flame.

	At last, the burning stopped. From the waist down, I was a male elk. Above that, I was a man, a fit, muscular man, except for the impressive rack of antlers on my head.		At last, the burning stopped. From the waist down, I was a male elk. Above that, I was a man, a fit, muscular man, except for the impressive rack of antlers on my head.
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	An owl flew overhead, and I could feel its thoughts, focused on a mouse in the bushes on the other side of the clearing. I realized that I could feel all the life around me - all the birds and animals, down to the invertebrates scurrying across the ground and burrowing beneath it. I could even feel the web of life sustained by the microbes in soil, plants and air. I stood still, marveling and dumbfounded by the intricacy of the pulsating, constantly changing interplay of life energies that surrounded us.		An owl flew overhead, and I could feel its thoughts, focused on a mouse in the bushes on the other side of the clearing. I realized that I could feel all the life around me - all the birds and animals, down to the invertebrates scurrying across the ground and burrowing beneath it. I could even feel the web of life sustained by the microbes in soil, plants and air. I stood still, marveling and dumbfounded by the intricacy of the pulsating, constantly changing interplay of life energies that surrounded us.

	I threw back my head, and bugled the challenge of the stag elk whose antlers and hooves I wore. The coyotes on the hillside stopped their hunt and added their song to mine~~, as did the~~ white tail ~~deer~~ in the valley ~~thickets~~ below us. A stallion on the ranch over the hill knelt to me. Even the military dogs on the Army camp on the horizon yelped and howled, confusing and alarming their handlers.		I threw back my head, and bugled the challenge of the stag elk whose antlers and hooves I wore. The coyotes on the hillside stopped their hunt and added their song to mine. A white tail buck in the valley thicket below us answered me. A stallion on the ranch over the hill knelt to me. Even the military dogs on the Army camp on the horizon yelped and howled, confusing and alarming their handlers.

	I was the Lord of the Forest, and I was magnificent. From horizon to horizon, every creature with ~~enough~~ intelligence enough to do so signaled its obeisance to me.		I was the Lord of the Forest, and I was magnificent. From horizon to horizon, every creature with the intelligence enough to do so signaled its obeisance to me.

	All creatures save one. Jess. She stood facing me, with a small smile, lips slightly parted, and a look in her eyes that said she knew just what to do with an uppity male. She stepped forward and ran one hand up over my muscled chest, barely touching the skin. With her other hand, she reached up, grasped an antler, and pulled my face down to meet hers. Our lips touched, open mouthed, and her tongue lightly ran over mine. She held my mouth to hers with a hand on the back of my neck, as her other ran down and massaged the elk bull's sheath between my legs.		All creatures save one. Jess. She stood facing me, with a small smile, lips slightly parted, and a look in her eyes that said she knew just what to do with an uppity male. She stepped forward and ran one hand up over my muscled chest, barely touching the skin. With her other hand, she reached up, grasped an antler, and pulled my face down to meet hers. Our lips touched, open mouthed, and her tongue lightly ran over mine. She held my mouth to hers with a hand on the back of my neck, as her other ran down and massaged the elk bull's sheath between my legs.

	We made love on our altar. Her fair skin glowed gold and ~~white~~ in the moonlight and candlelight. Her head was haloed by the pentacle embroidered on the altar cloth. She was every bit the Goddess to my God. I tried to be gentle, conscious of the size of my elk parts. She took me with a force that surprised me. A small part of my brain rebelled. After all, the head of my cock should be somewhere around her sternum. Then the rest of my brain said shut up, it's magic, and it need not follow the laws of the everyday world. We moaned loudly together as her orgasm brought me over the top. I lay down next to her, gathered her to me, and pulled the altar cloth over us as a blanket.		We made love on our altar. Her fair skin glowed gold and silver in the moonlight and candlelight. Her head was haloed by the pentacle embroidered on the altar cloth. She was every bit the Goddess to my God. I tried to be gentle, conscious of the size of my elk parts. She took me with a force that surprised me. A small part of my brain rebelled. After all, the head of my cock should be somewhere around her sternum. Then the rest of my brain said shut up, it's magic, and it need not follow the laws of the everyday world. We moaned loudly together as her orgasm brought me over the top. I lay down next to her, gathered her to me, and pulled the altar cloth over us as a blanket.

	I woke up the next morning to a cloudy sunrise. The memory of last night's events came to me in a rush - the wonder of the magnitude and glory of the life surrounding us, and the sacred sex that followed. I grabbed my legs, unsure whether I hoped to feel human skin or elk hair.		I woke up the next morning to a cloudy sunrise. The memory of last night's events came to me in a rush - the wonder of the magnitude and glory of the life surrounding us, and the sacred sex that followed. I grabbed my legs, unsure whether I hoped to feel human skin or elk hair.

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	Author's note: This is a sequel to a story that got lost in the crash. I'll have to recreate it at some point.		''Author's note: This is a sequel to a story that got lost in the crash. I'll have to recreate it at some point.

	In the missing story, a pair of college students ~~are going~~ to see a movie. Instead, they ~~meet~~ Aphrodite, who ~~offers~~ one of them a gift. He ~~asks~~ for better understanding of women, and was changed into one for a semester. Then she ~~turns~~ to the other, and ~~says~~ she'd give him a boon as well, but someone else ~~has~~ plans for him. This is his story.		In the missing story, a pair of college students went to see a movie. Instead, they met Aphrodite, who offered one of them a gift. He asked for better understanding of women, and was changed into one for a semester. Then she turned to the other, and said she'd give him a boon as well, but someone else had plans for him. This is his story.

	I'~~d appreciate any constructive advice anyone might want to offer~~.		There is a love scene in this story. I tried to make it serve the plot, and tried to keep it in the realm of erotica rather than porn. I hope you'll think I succeeded.

			I'd appreciate any constructive advice anyone might want to offer.''

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	My girlfriend Jess and I were standing on a hillside on the edges of the Texas Hill Country. It was May first - Beltaine - a warm spring night, and we were skyclad, or naked. In front of us was a large flat-topped boulder with an embroidered altar cloth on it. On the wine-colored cloth was a chalice, a knife and several candles. Jess was calling her Goddess as we started the ceremony.		My girlfriend Jess and I were standing on a hillside on the edges of the Texas Hill Country. It was May first - Beltaine - a warm spring night, and we were skyclad, or naked. In front of us was a large flat-topped boulder with an embroidered altar cloth on it. On the wine-colored cloth was a chalice, a knife and several candles. Jess was calling her Goddess as we started the ceremony.

	Until a few months ago, I had been somewhat amused by Jess's choice of belief. Then I met the goddess Aphrodite and had watched her change my roommate into a girl. Since then, I have become a believer in magic. My roommate, Tom, now Tommie, had used some of the insights he, er, she had gained to hook me up with ~~a friend of ours~~. And that's how I ended up standing naked on a hillside, taking part in a neo-pagan ritual.		Until a few months ago, I had been somewhat amused by Jess's choice of belief. Then I met the goddess Aphrodite and had watched her change my roommate into a girl. Since then, I have become a believer in magic. My roommate, Tom, now Tommie, had used some of the insights he, er, she had gained to hook me up with Jess. And that's how I ended up standing naked on a hillside, taking part in a neo-pagan ritual.

	I listened as she finished her invocation and lit the Goddess candle. It was my turn to call the male half of the divinity. I began, rather nervously, to say the words I had rehearsed seveal times in my mind. Aphrodite had said that some other deity had plans for me. ~~With that in mind,~~ I was sure that invoking a deity was asking for trouble. Still, I loved Jess, and she wanted me to be here.		I listened as she finished her invocation and lit the Goddess candle. It was my turn to call the male half of the divinity. I began, rather nervously, to say the words I had rehearsed seveal times in my mind. Aphrodite had said that some other deity had plans for me. I was sure that invoking a deity was asking for trouble. Still, I loved Jess, and she wanted me to be here.

	I mumbled something about the Lord of the Forest, Stag-king, Cernunnos, protector and father, asking him to join us and lend his power to our rite. I struck a match and lit the God's candle.		I mumbled something about the Lord of the Forest, Stag-king, Cernunnos, protector and father, asking him to join us and lend his power to our rite. I struck a match and lit the God's candle.

	Immediately, a surge of heat seared into my feet from the sandy soil. I tried to pick them up but I could not ~~move~~. The heat traveled up my legs, and cramps forced me onto my toes. Bones in my feet grated against each other. I looked down, and three of the toes on each feet were receding upwards. The other two were changing, darkening, hardening. It took me a few minutes to realize they were becoming hooves. Cloven deer hooves. I watched in horrified fascination as my feet grew longer, and my ankles ~~became~~ hocks. Brown hair sprouted on my legs as they cramped and cracked. The heat traveled up my body until it felt like I was completely engulfed in flame.		Immediately, a surge of heat seared into my feet from the sandy soil. I tried to pick them up but could not. The heat traveled up my legs, and cramps in my calves and feet forced me onto my toes. Bones in my feet grated against each other. I looked down, and three of the toes on each feet were receding upwards. The other two were changing, darkening, hardening. It took me a few minutes to realize they were becoming hooves. Cloven deer hooves. I watched in horrified fascination as my feet grew longer, and the heat reshaped my ankles into hocks. Brown hair sprouted on my legs as they cramped and cracked. My shins shortened, and my thighs became powerful haunches. The heat traveled up my body until I felt like I was completely engulfed in flame.

	''(Is more detail needed here, or is it okay to leave some to the reader's imagination? -Triskie)''		''(Is more detail needed here, or is it okay to leave some to the reader's imagination? -Triskie)''

			At last, the burning stopped. From the waist down, I was a male elk. Above that, I was a man, a fit, muscular man, except for the impressive rack of antlers on my head.

	~~At last~~, the ~~burning stopped~~. ~~From~~ the ~~waist~~ down, ~~I was a male elk~~. ~~Above that,~~ I ~~was a man~~, ~~a fit, muscular man, except for the impressive rack~~ of ~~antlers on my head~~.		An owl flew overhead, and I could feel its thoughts, focused on a mouse in the bushes on the of the side of the clearing. I realized that I could feel all the life around me - all the birds and animals, down to the invertebrates scurrying across the ground and burrowing beneath it. I could even feel the web of life sustained by the microbes in soil, plants and air. I stood and marveled at the intricacy of the pulsating, constantly changing interplay of life energies that surrounded us.

	~~An owl flew overhead~~, and ~~I could feel its thoughts, focused on a mouse in the bushes on~~ the of the ~~side of the clearing~~. ~~I realized that I could feel all the life around me - all~~ the ~~birds~~ and ~~animals~~, ~~down to~~ the ~~invertebrates scurrying across~~ the ~~ground and burrowing beneath it~~. ~~I could even feel~~ the ~~web of life sustained by~~ the ~~microbes in soil, plants and air~~. ~~I stood and marveled at~~ the ~~intricacy of~~ the ~~pulsating~~, ~~constantly changing web of life energy that surrounded us~~.		I threw back my head, and bugled the challenge of the stag elk whose antlers and hooves I wore. The coyotes on the hillside stopped their hunt and added their song to mine, as did the white tail deer in the valley thickets below us. A stallion on the ranch over the hill knelt to me. Even the military dogs on the Army camp on the horizon yelped and howled, confusing and alarming their handlers.

	I threw back my head, and uttered the bugling challenge of the stag elk whose antlers and hooves I wore. The coyotes on the hillside stopped their hunt and added their song to mine, and the white tail deer in the valley thickets below us knelt to me. Even the military dogs on the Army camp on the horizon yelped and howled, confusing and alarming their handlers. I was the Lord of the Forest, and I was magnificent. From horizon to horizon, every creature with enough intelligence enough to do so signaled its obeisance to me.		I was the Lord of the Forest, and I was magnificent. From horizon to horizon, every creature with enough intelligence enough to do so signaled its obeisance to me.

	All creatures save one. Jess stood facing me, with a small ~~knowing~~ smile, lips slightly parted, and a look in her eyes that said she knew just what to do with an uppity male. She stepped forward and ran one hand up over my muscled chest, barely touching the skin. With her other hand, she reached up, grasped ~~my antlers~~, and pulled my face down to meet hers. Our lips touched, open mouthed, and her tongue lightly ran over mine. She held my mouth to hers with a hand on the back of my neck, as her other ran down and massaged the elk bull's sheath between my legs.		All creatures save one. Jess. She stood facing me, with a small smile, lips slightly parted, and a look in her eyes that said she knew just what to do with an uppity male. She stepped forward and ran one hand up over my muscled chest, barely touching the skin. With her other hand, she reached up, grasped an antler, and pulled my face down to meet hers. Our lips touched, open mouthed, and her tongue lightly ran over mine. She held my mouth to hers with a hand on the back of my neck, as her other ran down and massaged the elk bull's sheath between my legs.

	We made love on our altar. Her fair skin glowed gold and white in the moonlight and candlelight. Her head was haloed by the pentacle embroidered on the altar cloth. She was every bit the Goddess to my God. I tried to be gentle, conscious of the size of my elk parts. She took me with a force that surprised me. A small part of my brain rebelled. After all, the head of my cock should be somewhere around her ~~rib cage~~. Then the rest of my brain ~~realized that quibbling about~~ it ~~made no sense~~, ~~given~~ the ~~rest~~ of ~~what had happened~~. We moaned loudly together as her orgasm brought me over the top. I lay down next to her, gathered her to me, and pulled the altar cloth over us as a blanket.		We made love on our altar. Her fair skin glowed gold and white in the moonlight and candlelight. Her head was haloed by the pentacle embroidered on the altar cloth. She was every bit the Goddess to my God. I tried to be gentle, conscious of the size of my elk parts. She took me with a force that surprised me. A small part of my brain rebelled. After all, the head of my cock should be somewhere around her sternum. Then the rest of my brain said shut up, it's magic, and it need not follow the laws of the everyday world. We moaned loudly together as her orgasm brought me over the top. I lay down next to her, gathered her to me, and pulled the altar cloth over us as a blanket.

	I woke up the next morning at sunrise. The memory of last night;s events came to me in a rush - the wonder of the magnitude and glory of the life surrounding us, and the sacred sex that followed. I grabbed my legs, unsure whether I hoped to feel human skin or elk hair.		I woke up the next morning to a cloudy sunrise. The memory of last night's events came to me in a rush - the wonder of the magnitude and glory of the life surrounding us, and the sacred sex that followed. I grabbed my legs, unsure whether I hoped to feel human skin or elk hair.

	I felt skin. It came with a deep sense of loss, mingled with relief. Then I realized my leg felt odd. Hard. Firm. I lifted up the altar cloth we were using. Instead of the scrawny body I had arrived with, I was toned and muscular.		I felt skin. It came with a deep sense of loss, mingled with relief. Then I realized my leg felt odd. Hard. Firm. I lifted up the altar cloth we were using. Instead of the scrawny body I had arrived with, I was toned and muscular.

	A bluebird flew over us. I realized I had known it was going to before I saw or heard it. I didn't have the square mile awareness that I did last night, but I still had some of it. ~~I wondered how I~~ was ~~going~~ to ~~tell my dad I wasn't going to major in business like we~~ had ~~planned~~. ~~Instead~~, I ~~was going to major in ecology~~ with a ~~minor in ancient religions~~.		A bluebird flew over us. I realized I had known it was going to before I saw or heard it. I didn't have the square mile awareness that I did last night, but I still had some of it. The same sense that told me about the bluebird told me that Jess was starting to wake up. She too had been blessed. Her body was toned and strong, yet quintessentially feminine. I woke her up with a kiss. We made love again as a soft, warm rain fell. After we finished, she reached up above my head, and handed me a perfect elk antler.

	~~The same sense that told me about the bluebird told me that Jess was starting to wake~~ up. ~~She too had been blessed. Her body was toned~~ and ~~strong, yet quintessentially feminine.~~ I ~~woke her up with a kiss. We made love again~~ as ~~a soft, warm rain fell~~. ~~After~~ we ~~finished~~, ~~she reached up above~~ my ~~head~~, and ~~handed~~ me ~~a perfect elk antler~~.		We completed our ritual and packed up our altar cloth and other implements. Then Jess and I gently dressed each other as we had undressed each other the night before. As we drove back to the Murchison U. campus, I wondered how to tell my dad I would not major in business like he wanted. Instead, I was going to major in ecology and minor in ancient religions. He wouldn't like it, but somehow I knew the entity that had possessed me the night before wanted it that way.

	--[[User:Triskelelynx\|Triskelelynx]] 04:54, 3 December 2011 (UTC)		--[[User:Triskelelynx\|Triskelelynx]] 04:54, 3 December 2011 (UTC)