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	I went back to my room, leaving Gerty and Robert to work out what those changes meant to them, as I had a hot date with a very messed up employer. My room was clean, damp and quiet so I closed the door, found the complimentary biscuits and was about to watch TV to see what news coverage there was of the event when a familiar knock on the door heralded the return of Mike.		I went back to my room, leaving Gerty and Robert to work out what those changes meant to them, as I had a hot date with a very messed up employer. My room was clean, damp and quiet so I closed the door, found the complimentary biscuits and was about to watch TV to see what news coverage there was of the event when a familiar knock on the door heralded the return of Mike.

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	mentally she's all your girlfriend. Oh, and a horse tail."		mentally she's all your girlfriend. Oh, and a horse tail."

	"So she's a ~~friek~~?"		"So she's a victorian sideshow?"

	"She's differenty arranged to most normal girls, that all. But mentally she really loves you and just wants		"She's differenty arranged to most normal girls, that all. But mentally she really loves you and just wants
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	"One of the things is that sometimes there is a bit of a mental change as well. Mike here was a man, is		"One of the things is that sometimes there is a bit of a mental change as well. Mike here was a man, is
	now a woman and it seems that he needs sex about three times a day in order to stay sane. ~~Sandra~~ seems		now a woman and it seems that he needs sex about three times a day in order to stay sane. Sharon seems
	to need to run, like take exercise, and she's gone off running somewhere. If we look out of the window		to need to run, like take exercise, and she's gone off running somewhere. If we look out of the window
	perhaps we can see her."		perhaps we can see her."
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	As a party of odd characters we were ready to face whatever the hotel had to offer in terms		As a party of odd characters we were ready to face whatever the hotel had to offer in terms
	of food.		of food...

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 back, she sat on the bed (and then shifted onto one buttock as she'd sat on her tail) and cried
 into her hooves, wiping tears away with a sheet scooped up over a hoof. It was my turn to comfort
-her, Mary and Mike looked on.
+her, Mary and Mike looked on. Hugging a girl with black horsehair, and who feels hard and
 Mike said "It was a fucking brutal thing to do, Jesse."
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 heavy on the atmosphere in the room. I needed food, the sun was getting low in the sky, and it had
 been an exhausting afternoon, both mentally and physically.

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	I went back to my room, leaving Gerty and Robert to work out what those changes meant to them, as I had a hot date with a very messed up employer. My room was clean, damp and quiet so I closed the door, found the complimentary biscuits and was about to watch TV to see what news coverage there was of the event when a familiar knock on the door heralded the return of Mike.		I went back to my room, leaving Gerty and Robert to work out what those changes meant to them, as I had a hot date with a very messed up employer. My room was clean, damp and quiet so I closed the door, found the complimentary biscuits and was about to watch TV to see what news coverage there was of the event when a familiar knock on the door heralded the return of Mike.

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	"I've not actually had a clear enough mind to work out everything there is" he admitted.		"I've not actually had a clear enough mind to work out everything there is" he admitted.

	Starting with the zips on the inside of each leg, which opened upward gave him access to his platform boots, shiny black and with about a six inch heel and a two inch platform. He undid the zips and took his boots off, leaving sheer stockinged feet. He stood up and found it impossible to put his heels on the floor. "Dammit, feet that must wear heels, yup, that was part of the script" he muttered to himself, sat back down and undid the zips from wrist to elbow and down the front of the catsuit. I helped him shrug the leather off his shoulders, ~~noticing~~ that the leather was soft and lined with a satin lining. Under the pink satin slip which I guess was part of his original ~~clothing~~, his is bra contained considerable mounds of flesh, but when the bra was released there was no sag - his breasts simply stayed pointing straight out. What was absolutely noticable now that the nipples were released from fabric is that they were unnaturally wide and long, on areolas that gave them further distance and height. Each one did not look like a normal nipple, more like a tube with a hole at the end. Perhaps Mike had not encountered a real nipple before, because each looked more like a small straw with a single opening. He lifted each breast and examined it. He stood up and balanced on the balls of his feet as he removed the rest of the catsuit, garter belt, stockings and pink matching satin knickers. Now naked he went into the bathroom to examine himself in the mirror. There was somthing wrong with his walk. He looked every inch a shapely and beautiful woman, but when he walked his walk didn't match the body. It took me a while to realise what it was, and my suspicions were confirmed when he came back in the room and sat down, facing me, legs wide apart, bush in full view.		Starting with the zips on the inside of each leg, which opened upward gave him access to his platform boots, shiny black and with about a six inch heel and a two inch platform. He undid the zips and took his boots off, leaving sheer stockinged feet. He stood up and found it impossible to put his heels on the floor. "Dammit, feet that must wear heels, yup, that was part of the script" he muttered to himself as his heels hoveed about four inches from the floor, sat back down and undid the zips from wrist to elbow and down the front of the catsuit. I helped him shrug the leather off his shoulders, as he was having difficulties manipulating the material with the long fingernails. I noticed that the leather was soft and lined with a satin lining. Under the pink satin slip which I guess was part of his original costume, his bra contained considerable mounds of flesh, but when the bra was released there was no sag - his breasts simply stayed pointing straight out. What was absolutely noticable now that the nipples were released from fabric is that they were unnaturally wide and long, on areolas that gave them further distance and height. Each one did not look like a normal nipple, more like a tube with a hole at the end. Perhaps Mike had not encountered a real nipple before, because each looked more like a small straw with a single opening. He lifted each breast and examined it. It looked not quite right.

			"May I feel?"

			"Pervy bastard" he said, but his body moved as if to say yes.

			The breasts were light, as if filled with air, certainly not solid. When I let them go they went straight back to pointing straight out, nipples erect.

			"I know that they are going to get bigger" he said sadly as he looked down at them.

			"What do you mean?" I asked

			"Didn't you notice when I first walked in, they were much larger than this. This is small size - they grow as I get hornier."

			He stood up and balanced on the balls of his feet as he removed the rest of the catsuit, garter belt, stockings and pink matching satin knickers. Now naked he went into the bathroom to examine himself in the mirror. There was somthing wrong with his walk. He looked every inch a shapely and beautiful woman, but when he walked his walk didn't match the body. It took me a while to realise what it was, and my suspicions were confirmed when he came back in the room and sat down, facing me, legs wide apart, bush in full view.

	"Mike, you walk and sit like a man."		"Mike, you walk and sit like a man."
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	"No, and if you've not found someone else to screw in seven and a half hours, I'll be wanting another $200 from you. This is a business arrangement."		"No, and if you've not found someone else to screw in seven and a half hours, I'll be wanting another $200 from you. This is a business arrangement."

	"Bastard." He went to my closet and helped himself to one of my shirts. As he put it on it changed ~~form~~, and after a few seconds was a form hugging, fitted PVC shirt revealing a cleavage and waist.		"Bastard." He went to my closet and helped himself to one of my cotton shirts. As he put it on it changed, and after a few seconds was a form hugging, fitted PVC shirt revealing a cleavage and tight waist.

	He went into a tyrade of expletive abuse about his condition. Frankly I was somewhat interested in what was going to happen, so I sat on the bed while he tried on different garments from my wardrobe. ~~Boxer~~ shorts - shiny crotchless latex. ~~Trousers~~ - PVC hobble skirt. ~~Jumper~~ - satin negligee, every piece of normal garment turned into somthing fantasy and more suited to ~~erotic sex~~. As he took the garment off it reverted to it's original form. Naked worked, from there on it was strictly glamour, exotic dancing and materials entirely unsuited to a temperate climate. Even my spare running shoes morphed into high heeled patent ankle boots.		He went into a tyrade of expletive abuse about his condition. Frankly I was somewhat interested in what was going to happen, so I sat on the bed while he tried on different garments from my wardrobe. Cotton boxer shorts - shiny crotchless latex knickers. Polyester trousers - PVC hobble skirt. Cotton running shirt - satin negligee, every piece of normal garment turned into somthing fantasy and more suited to a brothel. As he took the garment off it reverted to it's original form. Naked worked, from there on it was strictly glamour, exotic dancing and materials entirely unsuited to a temperate climate. Even my spare running shoes morphed into high heeled patent ankle boots.

			"I need a pee." he said

			"Remember to sit down."

	While he was in the bathroom there was a loud hammering at the door. I looked through the peephole and found a man in a shirt and trousers waiting patiently for me to open the door.		While he was in the bathroom there was a loud hammering at the door. I looked through the peephole and found a man in a shirt and trousers waiting patiently for me to open the door.
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	"What do you want?"		"What do you want?"

	"I found your room number in my room and I wondered if you knew where my ~~horse~~ is?"		"I found your room number in my room and I wondered if you knew where my pony is?"

	OK, think fast. Deny knowledge, door comes in, get beaten up. Say I know somthing, have to let him in. Mike will be no good in a fight.		OK, think fast. Deny knowledge, door comes in, get beaten up. Say I know somthing, have to let him in. Might get beaten up. Mike will be no good in a fight. Least best alternative...

	"Yeah, I saw your horse, and let her know which room I was in"		"Yeah, I saw your horse, she needed water and when I got into the room she barged past me and ran off. And I left the note to let her know which room I was in if she came back..."

	"How is a horse going to read a note, are you simple or somthing?"		"How is a horse going to read a note, are you simple or somthing?"
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	He told me a whole backstory that simply could not be true - that he had driven down this morning from his ranch with his best pony in a horsebox behind his station wagon, was exhibiting his pony at a horse show, and suddenly for no reason the pony began to act all skittish and play up, and he couldn't control her properly so he went to take her home and the horsebox had been stolen, so without anywhere else to take her he took her to a hotel room (which seemed odd to me but fine to him) and left her in the room while he went looking for his trailer, and there were a lot of crazy people about all in a panic, and the law enforcement was about stopping him moving about, and he got interviewed by people and sent back to his room and found his pony had escaped and that there was this room number written on a scrap of paper, so how was I involved in all of this and where is his pony?		He told me a whole backstory that simply could not be true - that he had driven down this morning from his ranch with his best pony in a horsebox behind his station wagon, was exhibiting his pony at a horse show, and suddenly for no reason the pony began to act all skittish and play up, and he couldn't control her properly so he went to take her home and the horsebox had been stolen, so without anywhere else to take her he took her to a hotel room (which seemed odd to me but fine to him) and left her in the room while he went looking for his trailer, and there were a lot of crazy people about all in a panic, and the law enforcement was about stopping him moving about, and he got interviewed by people and sent back to his room and found his pony had escaped and that there was this room number written on a scrap of paper, so how was I involved in all of this and where is his pony?

			"I honestly don't know."

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I went back to my room, leaving Gerty and Robert to work out what those changes meant to them, as I had a hot date with a very messed up employer. My room was clean, damp and quiet so I closed the door, found the complimentary biscuits and was about to watch TV to see what news coverage there was of the event when a familiar knock on the door heralded the return of Mike.

"Mike, stop swearing, I know you're frustrated, but stop swearing. Where's the $200?"

"Right here, and I need you now."

"Condom?"

"Here."

And to gloss over a frantic ten minutes, Mike was satiated and I was enjoying the post coital drain of energy when Mike began to properly examine himself, and since watching a fantasy explore itself is work of the very highest calibre, I somewhat joined in.

He had not bothered to take his leather catsuit off - it had. of course, a zip between the legs and so he was exploring him at skin level for what seemed the first time.

"I've not actually had a clear enough mind to work out everything there is" he admitted.

Starting with the zips on the inside of each leg, which opened upward gave him access to his platform boots, shiny black and with about a six inch heel and a two inch platform. He undid the zips and took his boots off, leaving sheer stockinged feet. He stood up and found it impossible to put his heels on the floor. "Dammit, feet that must wear heels, yup, that was part of the script" he muttered to himself, sat back down and undid the zips from wrist to elbow and down the front of the catsuit. I helped him shrug the leather off his shoulders, noticing that the leather was soft and lined with a satin lining. Under the pink satin slip which I guess was part of his original clothing, his is bra contained considerable mounds of flesh, but when the bra was released there was no sag - his breasts simply stayed pointing straight out. What was absolutely noticable now that the nipples were released from fabric is that they were unnaturally wide and long, on areolas that gave them further distance and height. Each one did not look like a normal nipple, more like a tube with a hole at the end. Perhaps Mike had not encountered a real nipple before, because each looked more like a small straw with a single opening. He lifted each breast and examined it. He stood up and balanced on the balls of his feet as he removed the rest of the catsuit, garter belt, stockings and pink matching satin knickers. Now naked he went into the bathroom to examine himself in the mirror. There was somthing wrong with his walk. He looked every inch a shapely and beautiful woman, but when he walked his walk didn't match the body. It took me a while to realise what it was, and my suspicions were confirmed when he came back in the room and sat down, facing me, legs wide apart, bush in full view.

"Mike, you walk and sit like a man."

Mike closed his legs and blushed.

"That is hardly the worst thing though, is it. I'm Mike, and suddenly I'm Mike in a womans body, and some of my brain has been taken over by this body and it's really horny and the only thing that I know for sure is that I need to know where the next screw is coming from, because that little bit of my brain that is operating this body is going to give me about eight hours of peace before I go mad again and need sex. And I can't afford $600 a day to feed this habit. You are a bastard Jesse, taking advantage of me like that. Give me my money back."

Just when I thought I was beginning to understand Mike he went off in another direction.

"No, and if you've not found someone else to screw in seven and a half hours, I'll be wanting another $200 from you. This is a business arrangement."

"Bastard." He went to my closet and helped himself to one of my shirts. As he put it on it changed form, and after a few seconds was a form hugging, fitted PVC shirt revealing a cleavage and waist.

He went into a tyrade of expletive abuse about his condition. Frankly I was somewhat interested in what was going to happen, so I sat on the bed while he tried on different garments from my wardrobe. Boxer shorts - shiny crotchless latex. Trousers - PVC hobble skirt. Jumper - satin negligee, every piece of normal garment turned into somthing fantasy and more suited to erotic sex. As he took the garment off it reverted to it's original form. Naked worked, from there on it was strictly glamour, exotic dancing and materials entirely unsuited to a temperate climate. Even my spare running shoes morphed into high heeled patent ankle boots.

While he was in the bathroom there was a loud hammering at the door. I looked through the peephole and found a man in a shirt and trousers waiting patiently for me to open the door.

"What do you want?"

"I found your room number in my room and I wondered if you knew where my horse is?"

OK, think fast. Deny knowledge, door comes in, get beaten up. Say I know somthing, have to let him in. Mike will be no good in a fight.

"Yeah, I saw your horse, and let her know which room I was in"

"How is a horse going to read a note, are you simple or somthing?"

She's a clever horse, no. Introduce someone else, will get complicated. Act stoopid?

"Of course, you are right. I'll let you in."

Simon seemed normal enough. He came in, sat down on the bed, I sat in the desk chair, I offered him some tap water.

He told me a whole backstory that simply could not be true - that he had driven down this morning from his ranch with his best pony in a horsebox behind his station wagon, was exhibiting his pony at a horse show, and suddenly for no reason the pony began to act all skittish and play up, and he couldn't control her properly so he went to take her home and the horsebox had been stolen, so without anywhere else to take her he took her to a hotel room (which seemed odd to me but fine to him) and left her in the room while he went looking for his trailer, and there were a lot of crazy people about all in a panic, and the law enforcement was about stopping him moving about, and he got interviewed by people and sent back to his room and found his pony had escaped and that there was this room number written on a scrap of paper, so how was I involved in all of this and where is his pony?

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	"I went to the gym. It was brillient. There was no one there, so I just used a running machine until the rubber		"I went to the gym. It was brillient. There was no one there, so I just used a running machine until the rubber
	tread got so damaged I had to give up. I think you can help Mary here." Mary, short, skinny, black hair, a bit		tread got so damaged I had to give up. I think you can help Mary here." Mary, short, skinny, pale skinned, black hair, a bit
	gothic, purple and black knee length dress and boots was standing down the corridor in the shadows some distance		gothic, purple and black knee length stripy dress and long boots was standing down the corridor in the shadows some distance
	away.		away.

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	"Mike, did you only take $200 out earlier?" I whispered to him.		"Mike, did you only take $200 out earlier?" I whispered to him.

	"No, why."		"No, why?"

	"How much you got?"		"How much you got?"
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	"Mary, what happened to you?" This was not going to be good.		"Mary, what happened to you?" This was not going to be good.

	Mary had been messing about at the convention, and entirely not taking any of it, like, seriously. Like,		Mary was a local girl who had been messing about at the convention, and entirely not taking any of it, like, seriously. Like,
	how can you totally be into being like Stormtroopers, or like lizard people. Duh. Like it's all so		how can you totally be into being like Stormtroopers, or like lizard people. Duh. Like it's all so
	stupid. Anyway, just to like take the piss we were seeing if we could borrow costumes from the stands		stupid. Anyway, just to like take the piss we were seeing if we could borrow costumes from the stands
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	Ziz (that's my best friends name) got into the back and she was, like, holding onto me at the		Ziz (that's my best friends name) got into the back and she was, like, holding onto me at the
	waist and being the back of a pantomime horse and we were parading about in front of the		waist and being the back of a pantomime horse and we were parading about in front of the
	stand. I was thinking how cool it would be to have four legs when suddenly the change happened		stand. I was thinking how cool it would be to have four legs and stuff when suddenly the change happened
	and ever since then I've been like this and I don't know where Ziz has gone.		and ever since then I've been like this and I don't know where Ziz has gone.

	Mary had got out of the costume to find no Ziz and the body of a girl who		Mary had got out of the costume to find no Ziz and the body of a girl attached to her bottom who
	she could completely control where Ziz had been.		she could completely control, just where Ziz had been.

	Mary seemed to be a humantaur. From the front she was just a normal looking girl, and in the shadows		Mary seemed to be a humantaur. From the front she was just a normal looking girl, and in the shadows
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	Her purple skirt rode over the extra body and the rest of the newly grown body was naked.		Her purple skirt rode over the extra body and the rest of the newly grown body was naked.

	"Do you mind if I lift the ~~skirt~~ up to see the join?"		"Do you mind if I lift the dress up to see the join?"

	"If you want" sniffed Mary.		"If you want" sniffed Mary.
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	As I approached I could see that the figure had really very large breasts, a corset and high heels,		As I approached I could see that the figure had really very large breasts, a corset and high heels,
	but also appeared to be male, and there was something wrong with his ~~arms~~.		but also appeared to be male, and there was something wrong with his hands.

	"It's taken me ages to get here, so many Police questions, and now I can't get into my room. There's		"It's taken me ages to get here, so many Police questions, and now I can't get into my room. There's
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	"Not while wearing ball gloves I can't." he said, and I undid the wrist strap and went to remove the glove.		"Not while wearing ball gloves I can't." he said, and I undid the wrist strap and went to remove the glove.
			Since you can't easily put ball gloves on yourself I asked "Who were you with?" and he explained that
			he had been with his girlfriend who had been dressed as a latex angel with black wings, and after the
			change had become a real latex angel with huge functional black wings and he had not seen her since.

	I went to let the air out of the car tyre valve with a key from my pocket. Neither helped. I pulled hard at the latex		I went to let the air out of the car tyre valve with a key from my pocket. Neither helped. I pulled hard at the latex
	and slipped it over what used to be his hands and was now a lump of spherical flesh. No fingers, just round flesh. Under the		and slipped it over what used to be his hands and was now a lump of spherical flesh. No fingers, just round flesh. Under the
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	chair and stared at his hands. We exchanged sentences, he was in shock. I helped him take off his boots, corset and skirt. The		chair and stared at his hands. We exchanged sentences, he was in shock. I helped him take off his boots, corset and skirt. The
	turbotits were going to be a different matter. The once inflatable latex breasts had become his, and		turbotits were going to be a different matter. The once inflatable latex breasts had become his, and
	unlike Mike, his were huge, heavy, and tipped ~~each~~ with a metal tyre inflation ~~nipple~~. Eventually I found somthing		unlike Mike, his were huge, heavy, and each one tipped with a metal tyre inflation valve. Eventually I found somthing
	sharp and cut the latex top away, leaving him with giant, unsupported breasts which weighed heavily on his frame.		sharp and cut the latex top away, leaving him with giant, unsupported breasts which weighed heavily on his frame.
	His waist had been sculpted permanently narrow by the corset, and when stood up, his torso leant obviously backwards to		His waist had been sculpted permanently narrow by the corset, and when stood up, his torso leant obviously backwards to
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	a cow, and once empty sat like flaps of skin on his chest. All was not well, however, as a great thirst		a cow, and once empty sat like flaps of skin on his chest. All was not well, however, as a great thirst
	came upon him, and he drank about six pints of water as I filled and refilled the plastic cup. I dialled a		came upon him, and he drank about six pints of water as I filled and refilled the plastic cup. I dialled a
	number on his mobile phone and held the phone for him to talk to his ~~girlfriend~~ who apparently had seen the news,		number on his mobile phone and held the phone for him to talk to his sister who apparently had seen the news,
	and had been worried sick for him. She said she'd be there the next morning, she'd have to get a flight in,		and had been worried sick for him. She said she'd be there the next morning, she'd have to get a flight in,
	and I left him with the TV on, working out how to operate the remote with a pen held between the two		and I left him with the TV on, working out how to operate the remote with a pen held between the two
	spheres of flesh where his hands used to be.		spheres of flesh where his hands used to be.

	Back in my room, Mary had stopped crying and discovered that she could no longer sit up in bed - too many		Back in my room, Mary had stopped crying and discovered that she could no longer sit up elegently in bed - too many
	limbs. Sharon was keen to get Mary some of her clothes for the additional body she had, and Mary had been		limbs. Sharon was keen to get Mary some of her clothes for the additional body she had, and Mary had been
	discovering a lot more about the body she now owned. The most distressing thing for Mary was that there was		discovering a lot more about the body she now owned. The most distressing thing for Mary was that there was
	nothing between her ~~legs~~ any more. The flesh simply sculpted smoothly, and she was working out an elegant		nothing between her forelegs any more. The flesh simply sculpted smoothly, and she was working out an elegant
	way to wipe herself as her genitals were now a long way from her arms. Ziz must have had small breasts, because		way to wipe herself as her genitals were now a long way from her arms. Ziz must have had small breasts, because
	they caused no inconvenience, and Ziz must have been a slim and shapely girl. It was quite a sight to see		they caused no inconvenience, and Ziz must have been a slim and shapely girl. It was quite a sight to see
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	back, she sat on the bed (and then shifted onto one buttock as she'd sat on her tail) and cried		back, she sat on the bed (and then shifted onto one buttock as she'd sat on her tail) and cried
	into her hooves, wiping tears away with a sheet scooped up over a hoof. It was my turn to comfort		into her hooves, wiping tears away with a sheet scooped up over a hoof. It was my turn to comfort
	her, Mary and Mike looked on. Hugging a girl with black horsehair, and who feels hard and		her, Mary and Mike looked on. Hugging a girl covered with black horsehair, and who feels hard and
	solid, like a horse does, is a distracting experience, and no matter that she'd just showered,		solid, like a horse does, is a distracting experience, and no matter that she'd just showered,
	she smelled of horse. I only now realised that under her black hair there was a ridge of mane		she smelled of horse. I only now realised that under her black hair there was a ridge of mane
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	been an exhausting afternoon, both mentally and physically.		been an exhausting afternoon, both mentally and physically.

	Mary found a pair of jeans for her new body, and pulled them on, and then that Sharon had feet only		Mary found a pair of jeans for her new body, and pulled them on, and then discovered that Sharon had feet only
	slightly bigger, so put Sharon's trainers on. If Mary lay on her back with her original legs splayed		slightly bigger, so put Sharon's trainers on. If Mary lay on her back with her original legs splayed
	out each side, she could curl up and over and attend to her new body. She needed something		out each side, she could curl up and over and attend to her new body. She needed something