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Lem: correct autospell errors

2017-07-12T13:12:16Z

correct autospell errors

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	"I would consider it a great honour to do so sir."		"I would consider it a great honour to do so sir."

	“Don't get too honoured. You have to earn it first. Misha has some high standards. But I think you pass the tests." I nodded in respect to him as I finished my final slab of meat before I leaned back in the chair, which squealed in protest to the shifting of my weight.		“Don't get too honoured. You have to earn it first. Misha has some high standards. But I think you will pass the tests." I nodded in respect to him as I finished my final slab of meat before I leaned back in the chair, which squealed in protest to the shifting of my weight.

	"That was quite tasty, what does your cook use to season this meat?"		"That was quite tasty, what does your cook use to season this meat?"

Lem: correct autospell errors

2017-07-12T12:51:29Z

correct autospell errors

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	“Well in that case I guess that we’re really not quite as different as it may seem, my people’s laws also hark back from antiquity. In our case our laws came from the days of the Kelmar Empire just over three thousand years ago. That empire must’ve been a shining light of civilization and justice for you to take your inspirations from it.”		“Well in that case I guess that we’re really not quite as different as it may seem, my people’s laws also hark back from antiquity. In our case our laws came from the days of the Kelmar Empire just over three thousand years ago. That empire must’ve been a shining light of civilization and justice for you to take your inspirations from it.”

	“No it wasn’t...not when the emperor himself was the biggest criminal. Most of the people who wound up in his courts were simply people that he disliked.” I spluttered at the thought of the Emperor being a criminal, the last Emperor of the Kelmar had been an upstanding warrior of the finest quality; the problem was the fact that he had borne, with his three wives, ten sons ~~who~~ he had each given one of the treasures of the Empire. Each of those sons had desired the throne and to attain that throne they formed a clan of their most trusted followers to seize it. The end result was beginning of the Clan Wars and the formation of the Ten Great Clans that had dominated the wars. Finally I got myself under control enough to explain that to George. He shook his head before he softly said “Most of the emperors were good honest men but into every good family there comes bad seeds, people who spoil the entire group.” I nodded		“No it wasn’t...not when the emperor himself was the biggest criminal. Most of the people who wound up in his courts were simply people that he disliked.” I spluttered at the thought of the Emperor being a criminal, the last Emperor of the Kelmar had been an upstanding warrior of the finest quality; the problem was the fact that he had borne, with his three wives, ten sons, to whom he had each given one of the treasures of the Empire. Each of those sons had desired the throne and to attain that throne they formed a clan of their most trusted followers to seize it. The end result was beginning of the Clan Wars and the formation of the Ten Great Clans that had dominated the wars. Finally I got myself under control enough to explain that to George. He shook his head before he softly said “Most of the emperors were good honest men but into every good family there comes bad seeds, people who spoil the entire group.” I nodded

	“In my people’s case you could say that there were ten bad seeds who each wanted to rule the Empire, though it was their father who sowed those seeds.”		“In my people’s case you could say that there were ten bad seeds who each wanted to rule the Empire, though it was their father who sowed those seeds.”

ShadowWolf: add {{universe}}

2009-02-14T18:27:19Z

add {{universe}}

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	By: [[User:Oberon\|Oberon]]		By: [[User:Oberon\|Oberon]]

Oberon at 17:01, 9 October 2007

2007-10-09T17:01:20Z

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	{{author note\|These Metamor Keep stories are best read in order beginning with Enter the Tiger, followed by Claws of the Tiger, Hot Under the Collar, Castle Fever Cat, A Pointless Patrol, A Good Time, A Bad Time, The Bandit King, Conversations, A Visitor in the Night, Joy of the Hunt, The Trial, The Raid, and finally A Swing at the Mule.}}

	By: [[User:Oberon\|Oberon]]		By: [[User:Oberon\|Oberon]]

Bryan: linking series together

2007-10-04T05:46:10Z

linking series together

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	“That’s something that everyone should live by.” Before he turned and left the room. I remained sitting there for a few moments before I headed for my quarters. I had a lot of things to do including going down to Euper to see if I could find myself a good supply of iron so that I could make the sword that I had sold to George. Before I took care of that though I had to give a prayer of thanks to Savnator for how she had guided the events of this day.		“That’s something that everyone should live by.” Before he turned and left the room. I remained sitting there for a few moments before I headed for my quarters. I had a lot of things to do including going down to Euper to see if I could find myself a good supply of iron so that I could make the sword that I had sold to George. Before I took care of that though I had to give a prayer of thanks to Savnator for how she had guided the events of this day.

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Oberon at 23:05, 3 October 2007

2007-10-03T23:05:40Z

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	~~'''~~These Metamor Keep stories are best read in order beginning with Enter the Tiger, followed by Claws of the Tiger, Hot Under the Collar, Castle Fever Cat, A Pointless Patrol, A Good Time, A Bad Time, The Bandit King, Conversations, A Visitor in the Night, Joy of the Hunt, The Trial, The Raid, and finally A Swing at the Mule.~~'''~~		{{author note\|These Metamor Keep stories are best read in order beginning with Enter the Tiger, followed by Claws of the Tiger, Hot Under the Collar, Castle Fever Cat, A Pointless Patrol, A Good Time, A Bad Time, The Bandit King, Conversations, A Visitor in the Night, Joy of the Hunt, The Trial, The Raid, and finally A Swing at the Mule.}}

			By: [[User:Oberon\|Oberon]]

	It had been just over a week since I had come back to the keep with a hole in my chest, but now finally Brian Coe, the healer had cleared me for action once more, however I first had to take care of that dumb trial that I was required to attend. I wondered why things couldn’t be more like my homeland where justice was swift and brutal, there was a strong level of deterrent in the system of justice in the Clanlands. The result of which was a relatively low crime rate. Things here though were different, with some trial in front of the local lord, in this case Duke Thomas Hassan V of the Metamor Valley and hereditary King of the Northern Midlands, though that title no longer really meant all that much since those territories had long since passed beyond the control of the Dukes of Metamor Keep.		It had been just over a week since I had come back to the keep with a hole in my chest, but now finally Brian Coe, the healer had cleared me for action once more, however I first had to take care of that dumb trial that I was required to attend. I wondered why things couldn’t be more like my homeland where justice was swift and brutal, there was a strong level of deterrent in the system of justice in the Clanlands. The result of which was a relatively low crime rate. Things here though were different, with some trial in front of the local lord, in this case Duke Thomas Hassan V of the Metamor Valley and hereditary King of the Northern Midlands, though that title no longer really meant all that much since those territories had long since passed beyond the control of the Dukes of Metamor Keep.

Oberon at 22:21, 3 October 2007

2007-10-03T22:21:49Z

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