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ShadowWolf: fix the {{universe}} tag (Wisp-touched, not Wisp-Touched)

2009-02-14T20:39:35Z

fix the {{universe}} tag (Wisp-touched, not Wisp-Touched)

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	{{Universe\|Wisp-~~Touched~~}}		{{Universe\|Wisp-touched}}

	Even after thirty years, the people of Cambridge still stared at Harry as he trotted past.		Even after thirty years, the people of Cambridge still stared at Harry as he trotted past.

JonBuck: Fixed a seperator.

2007-09-25T03:48:46Z

Fixed a seperator.

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	Kat blanched a little at being called a "doe", but approached anyway. She was greeted with a sniffing of her hands and head, an action she copied because it seemed like the right thing. The older doe's smell seemed to fill an empty place in her. Kat's eyes threatened to fill with tears. Her shoulders fell. The older doe embraced her in a comforting hug. "I'm sorry you didn't get what you wanted," she whispered, "but you're one of us, child. Feel welcome."		Kat blanched a little at being called a "doe", but approached anyway. She was greeted with a sniffing of her hands and head, an action she copied because it seemed like the right thing. The older doe's smell seemed to fill an empty place in her. Kat's eyes threatened to fill with tears. Her shoulders fell. The older doe embraced her in a comforting hug. "I'm sorry you didn't get what you wanted," she whispered, "but you're one of us, child. Feel welcome."

	~~'''-'''-'''-'''-'''-'''-'''-'''-'''-'''-'''-'''~~		{{Separator\|k}}

	On the third try the engine of the cult's old delivery van finally sputtered to life. The boxy 1928 Ford had been kept in very good condition by its former--and hopefully still living--owner. That is, until what the other deerfolk called a "wendigo" had gotten its claws on it. The rear doors were missing and the sides had long, raking slashes that were open to the interior. Kat had only reluctantly returned to it the day after her transformation to retrieve what she had thought were necessities at the time. The campsite had reeked of urine and smells she could not even name. Moonsong had either been so frightened she'd wet herself, or her new body had demanded she mark her territory like a dog.		On the third try the engine of the cult's old delivery van finally sputtered to life. The boxy 1928 Ford had been kept in very good condition by its former--and hopefully still living--owner. That is, until what the other deerfolk called a "wendigo" had gotten its claws on it. The rear doors were missing and the sides had long, raking slashes that were open to the interior. Kat had only reluctantly returned to it the day after her transformation to retrieve what she had thought were necessities at the time. The campsite had reeked of urine and smells she could not even name. Moonsong had either been so frightened she'd wet herself, or her new body had demanded she mark her territory like a dog.

JonBuck: Endnote.

2007-09-24T07:57:16Z

Endnote.

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	{{author~~'s note~~\|~~I doubt I'll ever finish this one, though the ideas~~ for an anthro deer society I've presented here have crept into other stories, like [[Colony]].}}		{{author endnote\|Ideas for an anthro deer society I've presented here have crept into other stories, like [[Colony]]. I remember that once all the main characters got to Freeport, the plotting and everything else really became bogged down in details. Everything became very, very creatively tangled up. I felt like I'd written myself into a corner I didn't know how to get out of. I'm still not sure I do.}}

	[[Category:Story]][[Category:Unfinished]][[Category:Jon Buck]][[Category:Anthropomorphic]][[Category:Wisp-touched]]		[[Category:Story]][[Category:Unfinished]][[Category:Jon Buck]][[Category:Anthropomorphic]][[Category:Wisp-touched]]

JonBuck at 03:37, 4 September 2007

2007-09-04T03:37:26Z

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	~~{{dropcap\|E}}ven~~ after thirty years, the people of Cambridge still stared at Harry as he trotted past.
			Even after thirty years, the people of Cambridge still stared at Harry as he trotted past.

	They didn't stare at the water nymphs frolicking in the Charles, nor did they stare at the elves, or dwarves, or beings who belonged in no mythology in the history of mankind. But Harry? Oh, yes. They most certainly stared at him.		They didn't stare at the water nymphs frolicking in the Charles, nor did they stare at the elves, or dwarves, or beings who belonged in no mythology in the history of mankind. But Harry? Oh, yes. They most certainly stared at him.

JonBuck: Minor fixes.

2007-09-04T03:36:31Z

Minor fixes.

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	~~Even~~ after thirty years, the people of Cambridge still stared at Harry as he trotted past.		{{Universe\|Wisp-Touched}}
			{{dropcap\|E}}ven after thirty years, the people of Cambridge still stared at Harry as he trotted past.

	They didn't stare at the water nymphs frolicking in the Charles, nor did they stare at the elves, or dwarves, or beings who belonged in no mythology in the history of mankind. But Harry? Oh, yes. They most certainly stared at him.		They didn't stare at the water nymphs frolicking in the Charles, nor did they stare at the elves, or dwarves, or beings who belonged in no mythology in the history of mankind. But Harry? Oh, yes. They most certainly stared at him.
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	{{author's note\|I doubt I'll ever finish this one, though the ideas for an anthro deer society I've presented here have crept into other stories, like [[Colony]].}}		{{author's note\|I doubt I'll ever finish this one, though the ideas for an anthro deer society I've presented here have crept into other stories, like [[Colony]].}}

	[[Category:Story]][[Category:Unfinished]][[Category:Jon Buck]][[Category:Anthropomorphic]]		[[Category:Story]][[Category:Unfinished]][[Category:Jon Buck]][[Category:Anthropomorphic]][[Category:Wisp-touched]]

JonBuck: Added a new category here: Unfinished. Not sure if it's done correctly.

2007-09-04T03:32:39Z

Added a new category here: Unfinished. Not sure if it's done correctly.

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