User:Robotech Master/Humans First (and Chakat Second) - Revision history

Robotech Master: Adding series templates now that it has a sequel

2009-07-31T04:53:29Z

Adding series templates now that it has a sequel

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 {{author note|Set in the [[wikifur:Chakona Space|Chakona Space]] universe of [[wikifur:Chakat|Chakats]], which is overall the property of [http://chakatsden.com Bernard "Goldfur" Doove]. It borrows some elements from other stories by other writers (see [[User:Robotech_Master/Humans_First_(and_Chakat_Second)/Appendix:_References|the appendix]] for more information).</p>
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Robotech Master: No longer a WIP

2009-07-21T09:27:01Z

No longer a WIP

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	{{author note\|Set in the [[wikifur:Chakona Space\|Chakona Space]] universe of [[wikifur:Chakat\|Chakats]], which is overall the property of [http://chakatsden.com Bernard "Goldfur" Doove]. It borrows some elements from other stories by other writers (see [[User:Robotech_Master/Humans_First_(and_Chakat_Second)/Appendix:_References\|the appendix]] for more information).</p>		{{author note\|Set in the [[wikifur:Chakona Space\|Chakona Space]] universe of [[wikifur:Chakat\|Chakats]], which is overall the property of [http://chakatsden.com Bernard "Goldfur" Doove]. It borrows some elements from other stories by other writers (see [[User:Robotech_Master/Humans_First_(and_Chakat_Second)/Appendix:_References\|the appendix]] for more information).</p>

	<p>I don't feel like this particular story rates the "XXX" tag (though a lot of Chakat stories do), but it does mention genitalia~~. It's marked as a "Work In Progress" mainly because I'd like to get some feedback on the draft before I submit it to Bernard for official posting on his site~~.}}		<p>I don't feel like this particular story rates the "XXX" tag (though a lot of Chakat stories do), but it does mention genitalia.}}

	{{dropcap\|I}} was just a punk kid who didn't know any better. That's the first thing I want to make clear. Well, it wasn't exactly a long time ago, so I guess I'm still a punk kid. But I'd like to think I at least know better now.		{{dropcap\|I}} was just a punk kid who didn't know any better. That's the first thing I want to make clear. Well, it wasn't exactly a long time ago, so I guess I'm still a punk kid. But I'd like to think I at least know better now.

Robotech Master: See the appendix for info on inspirations

2009-07-21T09:22:17Z

See the appendix for info on inspirations

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	{{author note\|Set in the [[wikifur:Chakona Space\|Chakona Space]] universe of [[wikifur:Chakat\|Chakats]], which is overall the property of [http://chakatsden.com Bernard "Goldfur" Doove]. It borrows some elements from other stories by other writers~~, which I will probably update here when my brain feels~~ more ~~alive~~.</p>		{{author note\|Set in the [[wikifur:Chakona Space\|Chakona Space]] universe of [[wikifur:Chakat\|Chakats]], which is overall the property of [http://chakatsden.com Bernard "Goldfur" Doove]. It borrows some elements from other stories by other writers (see [[User:Robotech_Master/Humans_First_(and_Chakat_Second)/Appendix:_References\|the appendix]] for more information).</p>

	<p>I don't feel like this particular story rates the "XXX" tag (though a lot of Chakat stories do), but it does mention genitalia. It's marked as a "Work In Progress" mainly because I'd like to get some feedback on the draft before I submit it to Bernard for official posting on his site.}}		<p>I don't feel like this particular story rates the "XXX" tag (though a lot of Chakat stories do), but it does mention genitalia. It's marked as a "Work In Progress" mainly because I'd like to get some feedback on the draft before I submit it to Bernard for official posting on his site.}}

Robotech Master: No longer a WIP

2009-07-20T22:59:29Z

No longer a WIP

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Robotech Master: puzzled look

2009-07-20T17:35:05Z

puzzled look

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	"Then set some coordinates and beam us out. Here, you'd better take this." I handed over the guard's sidearm—a heavy stun pistol. "I don't know how to use it, but I know you had weapons training."		"Then set some coordinates and beam us out. Here, you'd better take this." I handed over the guard's sidearm—a heavy stun pistol. "I don't know how to use it, but I know you had weapons training."

	Testpattern took the gun, ~~looking~~ puzzled. "You know, I could stun you and make my own getaway."		Testpattern took the gun, and gave me a puzzled look. "You know, I could stun you and make my own getaway."

	"And you could beam yourself out of the transporter room before I ever get there," I said. "If I were in your place, I probably would. But it'd waste time for me to go first—I wouldn't know what to do at the transporter room—so I'm just going to have to trust you."		"And you could beam yourself out of the transporter room before I ever get there," I said. "If I were in your place, I probably would. But it'd waste time for me to go first—I wouldn't know what to do at the transporter room—so I'm just going to have to trust you."

Robotech Master: clarifying difference markings

2009-07-20T16:47:33Z

clarifying difference markings

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	Punished already…heh. That gives me an idea. I think the sentence for Brother Jeremiah, or for any hard-core Humans Firster for that matter, ought to include beaming them into the body of a Chakat and making them live back in the Holy Kingdom among all their furry-hating friends. I'll bet that would change their attitudes pretty darned quick. It sure did for me.		Punished already…heh. That gives me an idea. I think the sentence for Brother Jeremiah, or for any hard-core Humans Firster for that matter, ought to include beaming them into the body of a Chakat and making them live back in the Holy Kingdom among all their furry-hating friends. I'll bet that would change their attitudes pretty darned quick. It sure did for me.

	~~Speaking of body changes,~~ Oceanwalker's offered to change me back to something as close to my old human pattern as they can make up, but I turned hir down. It wouldn't really be the "old" me, and I'd just as soon not have to get used to yet another new body all over again. ~~And to~~ be honest, I ~~suppose being a Chakat does~~ have ~~its compensations~~. I did ask hir to set me up with some fur-color modification, adding a black ~~band~~ around my human ~~torso~~ so it would be easier to tell me and Testpattern apart.		Oceanwalker's offered to change me back to something as close to my old human pattern as they can make up, but I turned hir down. It wouldn't really be the "old" me, and I'd just as soon not have to get used to yet another new body all over again. To be honest, this body feels as "natural" to me now as my old one did, and I'd rather stay like this than have to go through all that again. I did ask hir to set me up with some fur-color modification, adding black bands around my human and feline torsos and black markings on my muzzle, so it would be easier to tell me and Testpattern apart.

	So since it ~~looked~~ like I'd be ~~sticking around~~ for the long haul, I went ahead and picked out a Chakat name. I was thinking I'd just be Chakat Walker, but then I checked the database and found there are already a few hundred of those in various places—plus a whole bunch with Walker as part of their name, like Forestwalker or Skywalker…or Oceanwalker, for that matter. I wanted something a little more unique.		So since it looks like I'll be staying Chakat for the long haul, I went ahead and picked out a Chakat name. I was thinking I'd just be Chakat Walker, but then I checked the database and found there are already a few hundred of those in various places—plus a whole bunch with Walker as part of their name, like Forestwalker or Skywalker…or Oceanwalker, for that matter. I wanted something a little more unique.

	The answer came, of all things, from the association of my human name with a brand of Scotch—the one thing I thought I'd be glad to give up. I thought about Johnnie Walker Black, the more expensive kind of J.W. Scotch. And I just happened to remember that my paws—the part of me that I "walk" with—are black. I checked the name this suggested, and nobody else had taken it yet, so I went ahead and registered it.		The answer came, of all things, from the association of my human name with a brand of Scotch—the one thing I thought I'd be glad to give up. I thought about Johnnie Walker Black, the more expensive kind of J.W. Scotch. And I just happened to remember that my paws—the part of me that I "walk" with—are black. I checked the name this suggested, and nobody else had taken it yet, so I went ahead and registered it.

Robotech Master: body mod tweak

2009-07-19T16:13:26Z

body mod tweak

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	Punished already…heh. That gives me an idea. I think the sentence for Brother Jeremiah, or for any hard-core Humans Firster for that matter, ought to include beaming them into the body of a Chakat and making them live back in the Holy Kingdom among all their furry-hating friends. I'll bet that would change their attitudes pretty darned quick. It sure did for me.		Punished already…heh. That gives me an idea. I think the sentence for Brother Jeremiah, or for any hard-core Humans Firster for that matter, ought to include beaming them into the body of a Chakat and making them live back in the Holy Kingdom among all their furry-hating friends. I'll bet that would change their attitudes pretty darned quick. It sure did for me.

	Speaking of body changes, Oceanwalker's offered to change me back to something as close to my old human pattern as they can make up, but I turned hir down. It wouldn't really be the "old" me, and I'd just as soon not have to get used to yet another new body all over again.		Speaking of body changes, Oceanwalker's offered to change me back to something as close to my old human pattern as they can make up, but I turned hir down. It wouldn't really be the "old" me, and I'd just as soon not have to get used to yet another new body all over again. And to be honest, I suppose being a Chakat does have its compensations. I did ask hir to set me up with some fur-color modification, adding a black band around my human torso so it would be easier to tell me and Testpattern apart.

	So since it looked like I'd be sticking around for the long haul, I went ahead and picked out a Chakat name. I was thinking I'd just be Chakat Walker, but then I checked the database and found there are already a few hundred of those in various places—plus a whole bunch with Walker as part of their name, like Forestwalker or ~~even Skywalker~~. I wanted something a little more unique.		So since it looked like I'd be sticking around for the long haul, I went ahead and picked out a Chakat name. I was thinking I'd just be Chakat Walker, but then I checked the database and found there are already a few hundred of those in various places—plus a whole bunch with Walker as part of their name, like Forestwalker or Skywalker…or Oceanwalker, for that matter. I wanted something a little more unique.

	The answer came, of all things, from the association of my human name with a brand of Scotch—the one thing I thought I'd be glad to give up. I thought about Johnnie Walker Black, the more expensive kind of J.W. Scotch. And I just happened to remember that my paws—the part of me that I "walk" with—are black. I checked the name this suggested, and nobody else had taken it yet, so I went ahead and registered it.		The answer came, of all things, from the association of my human name with a brand of Scotch—the one thing I thought I'd be glad to give up. I thought about Johnnie Walker Black, the more expensive kind of J.W. Scotch. And I just happened to remember that my paws—the part of me that I "walk" with—are black. I checked the name this suggested, and nobody else had taken it yet, so I went ahead and registered it.

Robotech Master: Linking in the appendix

2009-07-19T07:35:28Z

Linking in the appendix

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			[[User:Robotech_Master/Humans_First_(and_Chakat_Second)/Appendix:_References\|'''Appendix: References''']]

	[[Category: Robotech_Master]][[Category: Chakat]][[Category: Chakona Space]]		[[Category: Robotech_Master]][[Category: Chakat]][[Category: Chakona Space]]

Robotech Master: linkifying C-space

2009-07-19T05:23:20Z

linkifying C-space

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	{{author note\|Set in the Chakona Space universe of [[wikifur:Chakat\|Chakats]], which is overall the property of [http://chakatsden.com Bernard "Goldfur" Doove]. It borrows some elements from other stories by other writers, which I will probably update here when my brain feels more alive.</p>		{{author note\|Set in the [[wikifur:Chakona Space\|Chakona Space]] universe of [[wikifur:Chakat\|Chakats]], which is overall the property of [http://chakatsden.com Bernard "Goldfur" Doove]. It borrows some elements from other stories by other writers, which I will probably update here when my brain feels more alive.</p>

	<p>I don't feel like this particular story rates the "XXX" tag (though a lot of Chakat stories do), but it does mention genitalia. It's marked as a "Work In Progress" mainly because I'd like to get some feedback on the draft before I submit it to Bernard for official posting on his site.}}		<p>I don't feel like this particular story rates the "XXX" tag (though a lot of Chakat stories do), but it does mention genitalia. It's marked as a "Work In Progress" mainly because I'd like to get some feedback on the draft before I submit it to Bernard for official posting on his site.}}

Robotech Master: Twenty Gig, not Twenty B

2009-07-18T13:46:20Z

Twenty Gig, not Twenty B

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	I was full of pride that I was finally getting to do my part to help strike a blow for decent humans everywhere. So full that I didn't realize I was basically just there as a sacrificial lamb—someone the leaders could toss from the sled when the cops showed up while they made their own getaway. They were the ones who did the really important—the really ''nasty'' stuff. Landing the crippling blows, pulling the trigger. We were the ones who got to take the fall.		I was full of pride that I was finally getting to do my part to help strike a blow for decent humans everywhere. So full that I didn't realize I was basically just there as a sacrificial lamb—someone the leaders could toss from the sled when the cops showed up while they made their own getaway. They were the ones who did the really important—the really ''nasty'' stuff. Landing the crippling blows, pulling the trigger. We were the ones who got to take the fall.

	Even so, I was lucky. I somehow managed to avoid getting caught at all those first few times. And the more I went out, the more I convinced myself I was doing the right thing. That was me, a good little brownshirt. I had a nice little cottage in an all-human community, which I never stepped outside of. I never had to interact with any of the furries as if they were real people. I could continue to live with my warped image of these evil remnants from mankind's darkest war, tainted with the original sin of the Twenty ~~B—the~~ twenty billion humans who died during the Gene War.		Even so, I was lucky. I somehow managed to avoid getting caught at all those first few times. And the more I went out, the more I convinced myself I was doing the right thing. That was me, a good little brownshirt. I had a nice little cottage in an all-human community, which I never stepped outside of. I never had to interact with any of the furries as if they were real people. I could continue to live with my warped image of these evil remnants from mankind's darkest war, tainted with the original sin of the Twenty Gig—the twenty billion humans who died during the Gene War.

	And so my tank ranneth over. Yeah, I was so full of shit.		And so my tank ranneth over. Yeah, I was so full of shit.