User talk:WolfyDrake95/New World - Revision history

WolfyDrake95: Still, thanks for your opinion and concern, Lloyd.

2009-07-17T14:07:52Z

Still, thanks for your opinion and concern, Lloyd.

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	::I just googled my own handle...unnervingly, I found a bunch of websites, like "Valuable Internet Information", that actually refer and link to this story. And even more unnervingly, I realized that I had no idea that my stuff was on those sites! Freaky...I blame the Internet. Damn accessibility.		::I just googled my own handle...unnervingly, I found a bunch of websites, like "Valuable Internet Information", that actually refer and link to this story. And even more unnervingly, I realized that I had no idea that my stuff was on those sites! Freaky...I blame the Internet. Damn accessibility.
	::As for the transformation bit about my stories, yeah, I worried about that too. But turns out my friends only notice the so-called "porn", and seem to think of the TF bit as a sideline. Damn it, this is a TF story, not porn! And as for the swearing, now that I've calmed down a little, yeah, I think I'll tone it down. Later. :) --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 06:26, 17 July 2009 (UTC)		::As for the transformation bit about my stories, yeah, I worried about that too. But turns out my friends only notice the so-called "porn", and seem to think of the TF bit as a sideline. Damn it, this is a TF story, not porn! And as for the swearing, now that I've calmed down a little, yeah, I think I'll tone it down. Later. :) --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 06:26, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

	:::My personal opinion is that you should restore the seven or so words that were removed from the story and allow the note at the end to take care of immature classmates. The way it reads now suggests an awkward modesty that does not fit your writing style. --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd]]		:::My personal opinion is that you should restore the seven or so words that were removed from the story and allow the note at the end to take care of immature classmates. The way it reads now suggests an awkward modesty that does not fit your writing style. --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd]]

			::::Nah, I think I'll just leave them out. You see, so long as those words remain, my classmates will have ample oppurtunity to discuss my "perverted mind". And I can't sway them with logic. A person is smart, but people are dumb; a crowd is only as smart as the stupidest person in them. Immature as they may be, they still have the strength by numbers: enough strength to overrule any argument I use by just screaming "You're so gay" over and over. And that's what I'm facing now. Logic is ineffective; argument is laughable. There is no point in trying to fight, so all I can do is remove it and hope that they will stop.
			::::On a side note, I think this event makes excellent story material. I've already got the storyline planned out: all I need is to finish up "A Better Place" and I'll be done. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 14:07, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

Lloyd Brunnel: mispelled my own name. Classy

2009-07-17T12:53:45Z

mispelled my own name. Classy

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	::I just googled my own handle...unnervingly, I found a bunch of websites, like "Valuable Internet Information", that actually refer and link to this story. And even more unnervingly, I realized that I had no idea that my stuff was on those sites! Freaky...I blame the Internet. Damn accessibility.		::I just googled my own handle...unnervingly, I found a bunch of websites, like "Valuable Internet Information", that actually refer and link to this story. And even more unnervingly, I realized that I had no idea that my stuff was on those sites! Freaky...I blame the Internet. Damn accessibility.
	::As for the transformation bit about my stories, yeah, I worried about that too. But turns out my friends only notice the so-called "porn", and seem to think of the TF bit as a sideline. Damn it, this is a TF story, not porn! And as for the swearing, now that I've calmed down a little, yeah, I think I'll tone it down. Later. :) --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 06:26, 17 July 2009 (UTC)		::As for the transformation bit about my stories, yeah, I worried about that too. But turns out my friends only notice the so-called "porn", and seem to think of the TF bit as a sideline. Damn it, this is a TF story, not porn! And as for the swearing, now that I've calmed down a little, yeah, I think I'll tone it down. Later. :) --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 06:26, 17 July 2009 (UTC)
	:::My personal opinion is that you should restore the seven or so words that were removed from the story and allow the note at the end to take care of immature classmates. The way it reads now suggests an awkward modesty that does not fit your writing style. --[[User:~~LloydBrunnel~~\|Lloyd]]		:::My personal opinion is that you should restore the seven or so words that were removed from the story and allow the note at the end to take care of immature classmates. The way it reads now suggests an awkward modesty that does not fit your writing style. --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel\|Lloyd]]

Lloyd Brunnel at 12:53, 17 July 2009

2009-07-17T12:53:20Z

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	::I just googled my own handle...unnervingly, I found a bunch of websites, like "Valuable Internet Information", that actually refer and link to this story. And even more unnervingly, I realized that I had no idea that my stuff was on those sites! Freaky...I blame the Internet. Damn accessibility.		::I just googled my own handle...unnervingly, I found a bunch of websites, like "Valuable Internet Information", that actually refer and link to this story. And even more unnervingly, I realized that I had no idea that my stuff was on those sites! Freaky...I blame the Internet. Damn accessibility.
	::As for the transformation bit about my stories, yeah, I worried about that too. But turns out my friends only notice the so-called "porn", and seem to think of the TF bit as a sideline. Damn it, this is a TF story, not porn! And as for the swearing, now that I've calmed down a little, yeah, I think I'll tone it down. Later. :) --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 06:26, 17 July 2009 (UTC)		::As for the transformation bit about my stories, yeah, I worried about that too. But turns out my friends only notice the so-called "porn", and seem to think of the TF bit as a sideline. Damn it, this is a TF story, not porn! And as for the swearing, now that I've calmed down a little, yeah, I think I'll tone it down. Later. :) --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 06:26, 17 July 2009 (UTC)
			:::My personal opinion is that you should restore the seven or so words that were removed from the story and allow the note at the end to take care of immature classmates. The way it reads now suggests an awkward modesty that does not fit your writing style. --[[User:LloydBrunnel\|Lloyd]]

WolfyDrake95: /* Regards to the Rant */

2009-07-17T06:26:42Z

Regards to the Rant

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	My user page could also pinpoint me, as well as my story, as I based a lot of Allan's life around mine, but with a user name like "Concerned Reader" I don't think anyone will link this to my other handles.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 23:09, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		My user page could also pinpoint me, as well as my story, as I based a lot of Allan's life around mine, but with a user name like "Concerned Reader" I don't think anyone will link this to my other handles.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 23:09, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

	:<span style="color: #006400;">On a side note, I think you may want to tone down the swearing on ~~you're~~ rant. Not because I don't like swearing, but because it distracts from the message you're trying to get across. Especially the use of "Faggots," this isn't Halo 3 chat, and many view it as a very derogatory name. It actually makes you look worse to have a swear filled rant, than a calmly written one.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 00:22, 17 July 2009 (UTC)		:<span style="color: #006400;">On a side note, I think you may want to tone down the swearing on your rant. Not because I don't like swearing, but because it distracts from the message you're trying to get across. Especially the use of "Faggots," this isn't Halo 3 chat, and many view it as a very derogatory name. It actually makes you look worse to have a swear filled rant, than a calmly written one.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 00:22, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

			::I just googled my own handle...unnervingly, I found a bunch of websites, like "Valuable Internet Information", that actually refer and link to this story. And even more unnervingly, I realized that I had no idea that my stuff was on those sites! Freaky...I blame the Internet. Damn accessibility.
			::As for the transformation bit about my stories, yeah, I worried about that too. But turns out my friends only notice the so-called "porn", and seem to think of the TF bit as a sideline. Damn it, this is a TF story, not porn! And as for the swearing, now that I've calmed down a little, yeah, I think I'll tone it down. Later. :) --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 06:26, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

Concerned Reader: /* Regards to the Rant */

2009-07-17T00:22:27Z

Regards to the Rant

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	My user page could also pinpoint me, as well as my story, as I based a lot of Allan's life around mine, but with a user name like "Concerned Reader" I don't think anyone will link this to my other handles.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 23:09, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		My user page could also pinpoint me, as well as my story, as I based a lot of Allan's life around mine, but with a user name like "Concerned Reader" I don't think anyone will link this to my other handles.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 23:09, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

			:<span style="color: #006400;">On a side note, I think you may want to tone down the swearing on you're rant. Not because I don't like swearing, but because it distracts from the message you're trying to get across. Especially the use of "Faggots," this isn't Halo 3 chat, and many view it as a very derogatory name. It actually makes you look worse to have a swear filled rant, than a calmly written one.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 00:22, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

Concerned Reader: /* Regards to the Rant */

2009-07-16T23:09:11Z

Regards to the Rant

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	:A stupid mistake on my part. For starters, my name ("WolfyDrake95") is also my Xbox Live Gamertag, so I was actually counting on the fact that they wouldn't go and Google it. But they did. Second, on my user page I left too few details to accurately pinpoint me (internet safety and all that), but enough for them to identify me if they already knew me. Two mistakes on my part, and one big screwup. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 22:05, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		:A stupid mistake on my part. For starters, my name ("WolfyDrake95") is also my Xbox Live Gamertag, so I was actually counting on the fact that they wouldn't go and Google it. But they did. Second, on my user page I left too few details to accurately pinpoint me (internet safety and all that), but enough for them to identify me if they already knew me. Two mistakes on my part, and one big screwup. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 22:05, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

			<span style="color: #006400;">All they care about is the so called porn? Because, at least knowing the people in my school, I'd think they'd be hounding you about the furry and transformation aspects of the story. I too googled your handle, and the first result is for shifti, and the second is for Bungie. Seems your story is pretty popular, if not for the right reasons. :(

			My user page could also pinpoint me, as well as my story, as I based a lot of Allan's life around mine, but with a user name like "Concerned Reader" I don't think anyone will link this to my other handles.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 23:09, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

WolfyDrake95: /* Regards to the Rant */

2009-07-16T22:05:22Z

Regards to the Rant

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	<span style="color: #006400;">Yeah, I don't think I'd want to be classified with a group of "SickF*cks" either. I've only shown one person my stuff on shifti, and even then, I haven't written anything near as personal as you have. How did they stumble across it? </span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 15:59, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		<span style="color: #006400;">Yeah, I don't think I'd want to be classified with a group of "SickF*cks" either. I've only shown one person my stuff on shifti, and even then, I haven't written anything near as personal as you have. How did they stumble across it? </span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 15:59, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

			:A stupid mistake on my part. For starters, my name ("WolfyDrake95") is also my Xbox Live Gamertag, so I was actually counting on the fact that they wouldn't go and Google it. But they did. Second, on my user page I left too few details to accurately pinpoint me (internet safety and all that), but enough for them to identify me if they already knew me. Two mistakes on my part, and one big screwup. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 22:05, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

Concerned Reader: /* Regards to the Rant */

2009-07-16T15:59:56Z

Regards to the Rant

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	:And if you found the angry rant refreshing, I'm pretty amazed...It's great that somebody understands what I'm going through. And yes, perturbed is the way to describe a number of them. Stupid SOBs. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 13:12, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		:And if you found the angry rant refreshing, I'm pretty amazed...It's great that somebody understands what I'm going through. And yes, perturbed is the way to describe a number of them. Stupid SOBs. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 13:12, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

	<span style="color: #006400;"> If by several words, you mean nipple, breast, and other such things, then your friends need to read more books. Several Young Adult books I've read are much more explicit than this was. Now I hate censorship in any form, being from the USA, especially censorship of the Internet, but I see why you had to change it to a more benign choice of words. It just seems to lose some of the urgency. If you want, I can see if I can dePornafy it without losing too much original meaning.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 13:57, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		<span style="color: #006400;">If by several words, you mean nipple, breast, and other such things, then your friends need to read more books. Several Young Adult books I've read are much more explicit than this was. Now I hate censorship in any form, being from the USA, especially censorship of the Internet, but I see why you had to change it to a more benign choice of words. It just seems to lose some of the urgency. If you want, I can see if I can dePornafy it without losing too much original meaning.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 13:57, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

	:Ah, thanks for the offer to help, but I've already done so. Pulled those "offending" words out and so on. I know it dulls the effects, but what can I do? However, I agree about the "read more books" part; a large number are, as Lloyd put it so well, ''perturbed''. In short, a number are sickfu*ks. That's why I'm so angry: I do ''not'' want to be classified with them. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 15:45, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		:Ah, thanks for the offer to help, but I've already done so. Pulled those "offending" words out and so on. I know it dulls the effects, but what can I do? However, I agree about the "read more books" part; a large number are, as Lloyd put it so well, ''perturbed''. In short, a number are sickfu*ks. That's why I'm so angry: I do ''not'' want to be classified with them. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 15:45, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

			<span style="color: #006400;">Yeah, I don't think I'd want to be classified with a group of "SickF*cks" either. I've only shown one person my stuff on shifti, and even then, I haven't written anything near as personal as you have. How did they stumble across it? </span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 15:59, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

WolfyDrake95: Reply

2009-07-16T15:45:06Z

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	:And if you found the angry rant refreshing, I'm pretty amazed...It's great that somebody understands what I'm going through. And yes, perturbed is the way to describe a number of them. Stupid SOBs. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 13:12, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		:And if you found the angry rant refreshing, I'm pretty amazed...It's great that somebody understands what I'm going through. And yes, perturbed is the way to describe a number of them. Stupid SOBs. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 13:12, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

	<span style="color: #006400;"> If by several words, you mean nipple, breast, and other such things, then ~~you're~~ friends need to read more books. Several Young Adult books I've read are much more explicit than this was. Now I hate censorship in any form, being from the USA, especially censorship of the Internet, but I see why you had to change it to a more benign choice of words. It just seems to lose some of the urgency. If you want, I can see if I can dePornafy it without losing too much original meaning.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 13:57, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		<span style="color: #006400;"> If by several words, you mean nipple, breast, and other such things, then your friends need to read more books. Several Young Adult books I've read are much more explicit than this was. Now I hate censorship in any form, being from the USA, especially censorship of the Internet, but I see why you had to change it to a more benign choice of words. It just seems to lose some of the urgency. If you want, I can see if I can dePornafy it without losing too much original meaning.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 13:57, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

			:Ah, thanks for the offer to help, but I've already done so. Pulled those "offending" words out and so on. I know it dulls the effects, but what can I do? However, I agree about the "read more books" part; a large number are, as Lloyd put it so well, ''perturbed''. In short, a number are sickfu*ks. That's why I'm so angry: I do ''not'' want to be classified with them. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 15:45, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

Concerned Reader: /* Regards to the Rant */ spelling error

2009-07-16T15:19:09Z

Regards to the Rant: spelling error

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	:And if you found the angry rant refreshing, I'm pretty amazed...It's great that somebody understands what I'm going through. And yes, perturbed is the way to describe a number of them. Stupid SOBs. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 13:12, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		:And if you found the angry rant refreshing, I'm pretty amazed...It's great that somebody understands what I'm going through. And yes, perturbed is the way to describe a number of them. Stupid SOBs. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 13:12, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

	<span style="color: #006400;"> If by several words, you mean nipple, breast, and other such things, then you're friends need to read more books. Several Young Adult books I've read are much more explicit than this was. Now I hate censorship in any form, being from the USA, especially censorship of the Internet, but I see why you had to change it to a more benign choice of words. It just seems to ~~loose~~ some of the urgency. If you want, I can see if I can dePornafy it without losing too much original meaning.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 13:57, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		<span style="color: #006400;"> If by several words, you mean nipple, breast, and other such things, then you're friends need to read more books. Several Young Adult books I've read are much more explicit than this was. Now I hate censorship in any form, being from the USA, especially censorship of the Internet, but I see why you had to change it to a more benign choice of words. It just seems to lose some of the urgency. If you want, I can see if I can dePornafy it without losing too much original meaning.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 13:57, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

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	:And if you found the angry rant refreshing, I'm pretty amazed...It's great that somebody understands what I'm going through. And yes, perturbed is the way to describe a number of them. Stupid SOBs. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 13:12, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		:And if you found the angry rant refreshing, I'm pretty amazed...It's great that somebody understands what I'm going through. And yes, perturbed is the way to describe a number of them. Stupid SOBs. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 13:12, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

	<span style="color: #006400;"> If by several words, you mean nipple, breast, and other such things, then your friends need to read more books. Several Young Adult books I've read are much more explicit than this was. Now I hate censorship in any form, being from the USA, especially censorship of the Internet, but I see why you had to change it to a more benign choice of words. It just seems to lose some of the urgency. If you want, I can see if I can dePornafy it without losing too much original meaning.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 13:57, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		<span style="color: #006400;">If by several words, you mean nipple, breast, and other such things, then your friends need to read more books. Several Young Adult books I've read are much more explicit than this was. Now I hate censorship in any form, being from the USA, especially censorship of the Internet, but I see why you had to change it to a more benign choice of words. It just seems to lose some of the urgency. If you want, I can see if I can dePornafy it without losing too much original meaning.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 13:57, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

	:Ah, thanks for the offer to help, but I've already done so. Pulled those "offending" words out and so on. I know it dulls the effects, but what can I do? However, I agree about the "read more books" part; a large number are, as Lloyd put it so well, ''perturbed''. In short, a number are sickfu*ks. That's why I'm so angry: I do ''not'' want to be classified with them. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 15:45, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		:Ah, thanks for the offer to help, but I've already done so. Pulled those "offending" words out and so on. I know it dulls the effects, but what can I do? However, I agree about the "read more books" part; a large number are, as Lloyd put it so well, ''perturbed''. In short, a number are sickfu*ks. That's why I'm so angry: I do ''not'' want to be classified with them. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 15:45, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

			<span style="color: #006400;">Yeah, I don't think I'd want to be classified with a group of "SickF*cks" either. I've only shown one person my stuff on shifti, and even then, I haven't written anything near as personal as you have. How did they stumble across it? </span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 15:59, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

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	:And if you found the angry rant refreshing, I'm pretty amazed...It's great that somebody understands what I'm going through. And yes, perturbed is the way to describe a number of them. Stupid SOBs. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 13:12, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		:And if you found the angry rant refreshing, I'm pretty amazed...It's great that somebody understands what I'm going through. And yes, perturbed is the way to describe a number of them. Stupid SOBs. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 13:12, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

	<span style="color: #006400;"> If by several words, you mean nipple, breast, and other such things, then ~~you're~~ friends need to read more books. Several Young Adult books I've read are much more explicit than this was. Now I hate censorship in any form, being from the USA, especially censorship of the Internet, but I see why you had to change it to a more benign choice of words. It just seems to lose some of the urgency. If you want, I can see if I can dePornafy it without losing too much original meaning.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 13:57, 16 July 2009 (UTC)		<span style="color: #006400;"> If by several words, you mean nipple, breast, and other such things, then your friends need to read more books. Several Young Adult books I've read are much more explicit than this was. Now I hate censorship in any form, being from the USA, especially censorship of the Internet, but I see why you had to change it to a more benign choice of words. It just seems to lose some of the urgency. If you want, I can see if I can dePornafy it without losing too much original meaning.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 13:57, 16 July 2009 (UTC)

			:Ah, thanks for the offer to help, but I've already done so. Pulled those "offending" words out and so on. I know it dulls the effects, but what can I do? However, I agree about the "read more books" part; a large number are, as Lloyd put it so well, ''perturbed''. In short, a number are sickfu*ks. That's why I'm so angry: I do ''not'' want to be classified with them. --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 15:45, 16 July 2009 (UTC)