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The story itself looks like it could use a bit of editing. May I take a stab at it? I'd like to put this one on Bryan's picks but at the moment it's too rough. [[User:Bryan|Bryan]] 17:31, 14 February 2008 (EST) | The story itself looks like it could use a bit of editing. May I take a stab at it? I'd like to put this one on Bryan's picks but at the moment it's too rough. [[User:Bryan|Bryan]] 17:31, 14 February 2008 (EST) | ||
There, I gave it a work-over too. You can see all the changes here: [http://www.shifti.org/User:Leasara/Three-Fourths?title=User:Leasara/Three-Fourths&diff=6155&oldid=6112]. With that I can feel secure in giving it my {{BP star}} of approval on Bryan's Picks. Thanks! :) [[User:Bryan|Bryan]] 23:18, 19 February 2008 (EST) | |||
Latest revision as of 23:18, 19 February 2008
Nice! I've been a fan of the three-into-one cerberus TF concept for a while myself, but haven't managed to get a story out of it yet. :) I assume you've seen Soty's cerberus TF sequence, since you mention him in the author note, but have you seen Black Rain/Black Wolf's "The Cerebus curse"?
The story itself looks like it could use a bit of editing. May I take a stab at it? I'd like to put this one on Bryan's picks but at the moment it's too rough. Bryan 17:31, 14 February 2008 (EST)
There, I gave it a work-over too. You can see all the changes here: [1]. With that I can feel secure in giving it my 
of approval on Bryan's Picks. Thanks! :) Bryan 23:18, 19 February 2008 (EST)