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I like the character, as well as the happenings. It may be a "Day in the life" story, but it's a well told one, and it defines the location just that much more. It's the characters that make the setting, so any definite character we have is always great.}} --[[User:Concerned Reader|Concerned Reader]] 03:24, 18 August 2009 (UTC)
I like the character, as well as the happenings. It may be a "Day in the life" story, but it's a well told one, and it defines the location just that much more. It's the characters that make the setting, so any definite character we have is always great.}} --[[User:Concerned Reader|Concerned Reader]] 03:24, 18 August 2009 (UTC)
:I will be sure to pass on your compliment. --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel|Lloyd]] 12:50, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

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This sounds oddly familiar. Not the plot, or even characters, but the way it's written. It was like reading something I'd written and then forgotten about.

I like the character, as well as the happenings. It may be a "Day in the life" story, but it's a well told one, and it defines the location just that much more. It's the characters that make the setting, so any definite character we have is always great. --Concerned Reader 03:24, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

I will be sure to pass on your compliment. --Lloyd 12:50, 18 August 2009 (UTC)