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Author's Comments

It's an ongoing project! Sometimes I think it will never end. More chapters to be added as they finish. As a note, 'Interludes' are a bit lighter and feature different main characters. Part One was the first story I'd ever written outside of a classroom, and I just took off from there. I've taken to editing it. Heavily.

Revan In Xanadu (Part 1)

Every story needs a beginning. With Xanadu, you know how it starts - a normal girl wearing a costume, thinking about what it means to her. Then the world changes.

Revan in Xanadu (Part 2)

The hero is very good at finding allies. Sometimes, however, these allies have priorities of their own.

Revan in Xanadu (Part 3)

(Almost) every game has a lava level. Lava levels usually have lava bosses.

Revan in Xanadu (Part 4)

It was inevitable. Seamless integration between the normal girl and the hero? No.

Revan in Xanadu: Big Change (Interlude)

Narrative shift! Is it possible to write from the POV of a giant without actually describing the narrator as "big"? Apparently so.

Revan in Xanadu: David's Camera (Interlude)

Another narrator shift, another sidestory.

Revan in Xanadu (Part 5)

Hey! Foreshadowing!

Revan in Xanadu (Part Six)

Zombies are popular in videogames. So are unpleasant revelations.

Revan in Xanadu (Part 7)

The first day ends in a call home.

Revan in Xanadu (Part 8)

Wake up, go for breakfast - hey, what's happening?!

Revan in Xanadu (Part 9)

Image links: (Please excuse my inability to draw... in terms of fault, it's part Paint, part Joysweeper.

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Both just say "I am Revan". They can give a reader a vague idea about what one(or is that two?) of my characters look like.

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+{{author endnote|''It's an ongoing project!  Sometimes I think it will never end.  More chapters to be added as they finish.  As a note, 'Interludes' are a bit lighter and feature different main characters.  Part One was the first story I'd ever written outside of a classroom, and I just took off from there.  I've taken to editing it.  Heavily.''}}
 *[[Revan In Xanadu (Part 1)]]
-:The first story I ever wrote outside of a classroom!  I was so proud of it back then...  Don't worry, it's been edited fairly heavily, as have all of these.  In which Hailey goes and gets a new outlook on life as well as a follower.
+:Every story needs a beginning.  With Xanadu, you know how it starts - a normal girl wearing a costume, thinking about what it means to her.  Then the world changes.
 *[[Revan in Xanadu (Part 2)]]
-:In which my protagonist's follower backstories himself, and then leaves prematurely.
+:The hero is very good at finding allies.  Sometimes, however, these allies have priorities of their own.
 *[[Revan in Xanadu (Part 3)]]
-:In which my protagonist faces The Lava Boss.
+:(Almost) every game has a lava level.  Lava levels usually have lava bosses.
 *[[Revan in Xanadu (Part 4)]]
-:In which my protagonist blunders around, and Revan and Hailey become separate entities.
+:It was inevitable.  Seamless integration between the normal girl and the hero?  No.
 *[[Revan in Xanadu: Big Change (Interlude)]]
-:In which we have a narrator shift and a sidestory.
+:Narrative shift!  Is it possible to write from the POV of a giant without actually describing the narrator as "big"?  Apparently so.
 *[[Revan in Xanadu: David's Camera (Interlude)]]
-:In which we have another narrator shift and another sidestory.
+:Another narrator shift, another sidestory.
 *[[Revan in Xanadu (Part 5)]]
-:In which Revan faces a Mary Sue and meets some new friends.
+:Hey!  Foreshadowing!
 *[[Revan in Xanadu (Part Six)]]
-:In which Revan faces undead and learns something unwanted about herself.
+:Zombies are popular in videogames.  So are unpleasant revelations.
 *[[Revan in Xanadu (Part 7)]]
-:In which the first day ends with a call home.
+:The first day ends in a call home.
 *[[Revan in Xanadu (Part 8)]]
+:Wake up, go for breakfast - hey, what's happening?!
+*[[Revan in Xanadu (Part 9)]]
 Image links:  (Please excuse my inability to draw... in terms of fault, it's part Paint, part Joysweeper.

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