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== Hello my name is Silverhit ==
== Hello my name is Silverhit ==


Hello, my name is Silverhit. I am a fan of transformation and fantasy stories. I also like to talk about it. So if you want to post comments on my story go ahead.
Hello, my name is Silverhit. I am a fan of transformation and fantasy stories. I also like to talk about it. So if you want to post comments on my story go ahead. I like to write stories but I rarely get the time to type my stories on Shifti. So you might see a story that is a W.I.P. Also I don't think I be able to write a lot of stories b/c I have little time on the computer but I will try to write as much stories as I can.  


:Oya, Silverhit.  Welcome.  What kinds of tf/fantasy stories do you like best?  Speaking for myself and myself only, I'm much more likely to read a story if it's either set in Xanadu or I have some hint of what it's about.  Otherwise I tend to either skip it or read three paragraphs and forget it.  --[[User:Joysweeper|Joysweeper]] 01:18, 4 June 2008 (EDT)
:Oya, Silverhit.  Welcome.  What kinds of tf/fantasy stories do you like best?  Speaking for myself and myself only, I'm much more likely to read a story if it's either set in Xanadu or I have some hint of what it's about.  Otherwise I tend to either skip it or read three paragraphs and forget it.  --[[User:Joysweeper|Joysweeper]] 01:18, 4 June 2008 (EDT)


:Thus showing the need for a good "hook" in the first few paragraphs of a story to catch a reader's eye. Perhaps you could add a little blurb beside the links to your stories mentioning something about what their subject is? I haven't read them myself yet, but mainly due to a lack of time - I promise to get to them eventually. :) [[User:Bryan|Bryan]] 01:29, 5 June 2008 (EDT)
:Thus showing the need for a good "hook" in the first few paragraphs of a story to catch a reader's eye. Perhaps you could add a little blurb beside the links to your stories mentioning something about what their subject is? I haven't read them myself yet, but mainly due to a lack of time - I promise to get to them eventually. :) [[User:Bryan|Bryan]] 01:29, 5 June 2008 (EDT)

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Hi, welcome to shifti.

Hello my name is Silverhit

Hello, my name is Silverhit. I am a fan of transformation and fantasy stories. I also like to talk about it. So if you want to post comments on my story go ahead. I like to write stories but I rarely get the time to type my stories on Shifti. So you might see a story that is a W.I.P. Also I don't think I be able to write a lot of stories b/c I have little time on the computer but I will try to write as much stories as I can.

Oya, Silverhit. Welcome. What kinds of tf/fantasy stories do you like best? Speaking for myself and myself only, I'm much more likely to read a story if it's either set in Xanadu or I have some hint of what it's about. Otherwise I tend to either skip it or read three paragraphs and forget it. --Joysweeper 01:18, 4 June 2008 (EDT)
Thus showing the need for a good "hook" in the first few paragraphs of a story to catch a reader's eye. Perhaps you could add a little blurb beside the links to your stories mentioning something about what their subject is? I haven't read them myself yet, but mainly due to a lack of time - I promise to get to them eventually. :) Bryan 01:29, 5 June 2008 (EDT)