User talk:Robotech Master/Meat the Press

Possible Typos

“I’m not getting anything at all now,” Rochelle reported. “We’re dead in the water up there, Rhi. He’s got us.”

I think it should be We're dead in the water up here.

Rochelle and Rhianna like stared at Annette Hewer.

Not sure if this is a mistake or not, but the like seems awkward.

Nice work! --Antimatter (talk) 03:47, 17 August 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the typo spottin'. Fixed 'em. —Robotech Master (talk) 05:42, 17 August 2012 (UTC)

Notes on the DC

Starbuck Peet’s Best Seattle Coffeehouse

:-)

“What on earth crawled up AlpoWoof’s butt and died?”

Not sure if that if a really weird typo or a joke I don't get. Probably the latter.

I like it whenever Cascadia makes an appearance. I'm from Portland myself, so I guess it must feel like familiar territory or something.

--Antimatter (talk) 20:07, 29 February 2016 (CST)

Comment

I hope I can put this here, Due to my inability to catch the authors in IRC I decided to post it here.

I wanted to write my honest opinion. Though it might be hard for me. :D

When I first found the setting info page, it scared me off, but I was persuaded to try it anyway. And I was really surprised, This world does not only works, it LIVES for me. At first I was quite put off by the way TG was handled. it seemed clishe to me, and I am not fan of TG stories in general. But latter parts improved in my opinion, so It became OK. What really surprised me, was how much potential this universe has. After reading Deserted and Merging Traffic, My mind focused my dreams and Daydreams on this universe, and started to think up the potential applications of The technology, and the impact on people. and in latter stories, I found many of the things I thought up. It expanded in my mind in such a great way, more that any story I was reeding in quite a long time.

Another great thing, was the way this story makes me nervous, worried about the characters, I hadn't happened in long time, only few stories did that to me. The way the characters were introduced and developed seems extremely natural, and feels just right. It makes the characters live. (For some reason, I keep hearing Fritz as Heath Ledger's Joker)

Next was The idea of integration. From the first point it was mentioned in Deserted, I was thinking about it. And When it appeared, I just loved the diversity of the way it happens. Especially Zane's case. It is hard to find a story, where full merger of two personalities is shown so well, The way he refers to both Zane and Terry, the way he is new person, made from the two, neither, but both. Perfect. And EXTREMELY rare, at least done this well. I also like the way society is shown. I feel this "museum planet" thing seems weird, but it also makes it easy to visualise.

The AI (Or rather RI) is shown is also a surprise. It is clear they are simulated personalities, as human as it gets, but they are also on different plane, they are digital, they work so differently that is is fresh to me. I love this balance between "program" and "Person".

As I said, it is hard for me to criticise a story, which contains so much of the elements that I looked for for so long. So...

Thank you for writing it, And I feel that this world will stay in my head long after I am done reading it (and there is a lot of it for me to read yet)

--Markoatonc (talk) 16:00, 15 March 2016 (CDT)