User talk:Robotech Master/More Foxed
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Hey, great story! I stayed up way to late last night reading it. I really am addicted to this setting.
Anyway, I wasn't really looking for typos as I read it, but I did notice a few:
- I had wondered whether it was really fair to let the RIDEs play, but it turned out that without reliable net access they were limited to what they had in their own internal databased, which for trivia weren’t necessarily any better than the good ol’ Mark 1 brain.
- from floral-print tourist rags to qubitite riches to freezing to death rags to hiding out in a guarded docking slip in a badlands town riches.
- I watched with some interest as the stewards and stewardesses secured Gordon in her seat.
--Antimatter (talk) 19:22, 10 October 2012 (UTC)