User talk:Robotech Master/More Foxed

Hey, great story! I stayed up way to late last night reading it. I really am addicted to this setting.

Anyway, I wasn't really looking for typos as I read it, but I did notice a few:

• I had wondered whether it was really fair to let the RIDEs play, but it turned out that without reliable net access they were limited to what they had in their own internal databased, which for trivia weren’t necessarily any better than the good ol’ Mark 1 brain.

• from floral-print tourist rags to qubitite riches to freezing to death rags to hiding out in a guarded docking slip in a badlands town riches.

• I watched with some interest as the stewards and stewardesses secured Gordon in her seat.

--Antimatter (talk) 19:22, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

Hey, thanks. I'll fix those. (Well, the first and third anyway. I'm not sure why you think "riches" is a typo there. The sentence structure being "from X rags to Y riches to A rags to B riches", whereupon X, Y, A, and B are descriptions of events…) —Robotech Master (talk) 22:20, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

Ah, sorry. I read that sentence a few times and it just didn't click. I kept thinking it should end after "badlands town," and that you must have accidentally put riches in there an extra time. Now that you explain it it makes sense, though :-) --Antimatter (talk) 06:23, 11 October 2012 (UTC)