Talk:Bad Case of Photosensitivity
From Shifti
You Asked For It, You Got It
Nothing terribly deep or cripplingly funny. Just a nice, well-executed vignette. The greatest criticism I can level against it is that it seems kind of bland, and I'm not sure what I could suggest to remedy that. It feels like a sequence taken out of a longer work, not a complete story in itself. --Proginoskes (talk) 15:09, 19 May 2013 (CDT)
