Talk:Nothing Up My Sleeve

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I either really don't know how to critique, or you guys are really good. I honestly found nothing to dislike about this story. Wearing the fursuit here I suspect is a metaphore for writing. I get much the same feeling the main character experiences while writing that he gets playing in the suit. Altogether this story is child-like without being childish.

Alveric