Talk:Camping at the Zoo
Hey, AxelGripp! I fixed some broken formatting and typos and things in your story.
Couple things here.
When you use angle brackets for things in your stories, you need to <nowiki> them, otherwise those brackets mess the formatting right up. Or else use < and > to fill in for < and > (if you click "edit" you can see how I did that to make them show up in the examples in this paragraph); you can run a search-and-replace in a text editor to clear those up. If you write in LibreOffice Writer, you can click File -> Export and then export the story to a Wikicode text file to have that sort of thing done for you automatically.
Also, you might want to be aware that when you put a story out in the open like you did, anyone (like me!) can come in and edit it. To make it so only you (and the site admins) have the power to edit your story, you might want to put it in userspace. For example:
http://shifti.org/wiki/User:Robotech_Master/Immunization_Camp
And I added a few things like category tags, a title/author header, and scene separators. Just little things that make it look better. You can see for yourself what I did and imitate it in other stories, or check the wiki's editing help pages for more information.
Anyway, a nice enough little story, now that it's actually readable! Thanks for writing it! —Robotech Master (talk) 05:20, 18 June 2014 (CDT)